Talk:Christine Nelson/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead[edit]
- Try shrinking the lead to three paragraphs per MOS:LEADLENGTH.
- Remove the comma after "first episode of Degrassi Junior High"
- It's Late → "It's Late" (all uses)
- That's about it here.
Concept and casting[edit]
- Is the hyphen necessary between "provocatively-dressed"?
- "Of the filming" doesn't sound right. Maybe change "Of" to "On" or "During".
Characterization[edit]
Role in Degrassi[edit]
- Except for the one in #The_Next_Generation, are the TV screenshots needed?
- Remove the comma after "were a baby".
- There's a word missing between "by parents".
- "withhold a payment" → "withhold payment"
- Is "day care" two words in British English?
- "which Spike responds" → "to which Spike responds"
Novelization[edit]
- "based from" doesn't sound right.
- Remove the comma after "support her daughter".
Reception and impact[edit]
- "story line" → "storyline" (all uses)
- "14 year-old" → "14-year-old"
- Remove the comma after "pregnant in real life".
- "for the Planned Parenthood" → "for Planned Parenthood"
References[edit]
- The main sections #Episodes and #Sources do not seem necessary. I would merge them all here into subsections as:
Progress[edit]
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