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A fact from Chun Afong appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 5 February 2019 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
"In an interesting development, Chinese investors started to sell their plantations to new European or American owners beginning the 1860s. Reasons for this are unclear. We know that at least one plantation owner/businessman, Chun Afong, returned to China.J. S. Walker's 1879 survey shows a list of nine plantations, with only one still owned by Chinese investors. At that time, the Hilo planta-25tion center had about 2,390 acres planted in cane." ([1])
Parts 1 - 7 Afong's emigration and early wealth[edit]
Taylor, Clarice B. (October 7, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-1". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 15, 2019.
Family background, boyhood of Chun Ah Fong, marriage and son Chun Lung
Taylor, Clarice B. (October 8, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-2". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 15, 2019.
1849 - Chun Ah Fong is taken to Hawaii with his uncle, a trader
Taylor, Clarice B. (October 9, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-3". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 15, 2019.
Arriving in Hawaii, registering as aliens, the customs official mistakenly changed his name to C. Afong
Taylor, Clarice B. (October 10, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-4". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 15, 2019.
Chun Afong was an apprentice in his uncle's mercantile store in the area that would become Chinatown. He learned English, and dreamed of becoming acquainted with the important men of the kingdom.
Taylor, Clarice B. (October 12, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-5". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 15, 2019.
He opened a business named Ah Fong and Ah Fat. He branched out doing business with the large Chinese community of plantation workers in Hilo. Background on plantation owner Benjamin Pitman. Chun noticed the Chinese laborers under Pitman were successful enough to have their own businesses. He also noticed the labor shortage on plantations.
Taylor, Clarice B. (October 13, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-6". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 15, 2019.
The 1851 onset of 5-year contracts for imported Chinese plantation labor. Afong's store burned down. He rebuilt it as Afong and Ahchuck
Taylor, Clarice B. (October 14, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-7". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 15, 2019.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 2, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-23". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Chun Afong has 50% in sugar plantation Pepeekeo at Hamakua on the island of Hawaii. Sends his oldest son Chun Lung (or Chung Lung) to study at Yale University. Son graduated with honors.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 3, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-24". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Chun Lung graduates from Yale, enters into an arranged marriage with a Chinese woman, and joins the family sugar business.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 4, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-25". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Julia and Chun's children and home life
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 5, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-26". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Kalakaua's election and the courthouse riot.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 6, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-27". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Appointed to House of Nobles, resignation, wheel barrow of gold
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 7, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-28". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Kalakaua's return festivities from his world tour; Afong's 1889 refusal to join the Wilcox Rebellion.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 9, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-29". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Afong family social life; labor shortages on the plantations
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 9, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-30". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
The Afong children
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 11, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-31". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Julia's American relatives come to visit in 1888
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 12, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-32". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Chicago Fayerweather kinfolk first impression of Chun Afong, who spoke perfect English.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 13, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-33". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Chicago cousins have a ball exploring the Afong house etc
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 14, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-34". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
More on the children cousins visiting. Chun Afong took them to his warehouse, and aboard the schooner Haleakala
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 16, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-35". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
E. E. Fayerweather relates the family history in the 1700s when English sea captain Benjamin Fayerweather sailed to Boston, and in the next century when the Fayerweathers went to Hawaii and China.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 17, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-36". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 18, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-37". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Story about the Afong family attending a circus. Fayerweather children meet "little Princess Kaʻiulani", who would have been 12 or 13 years old at the time.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 19, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-38". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
The Fayerweathers are invited aboard the USS Pensacola, and meet Kalakaua.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 20, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-39". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Anti-Chinese movement in the islands, tried to get Kalakaua's cabinet to get the legislature to ban importation of labor from China. The cabinet refused.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 21, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-40". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Son Chun Lung (or Chung Lung or Chun Ling) dies in 1889. His daughter-in-law talks him into going back to China. His son Toney (by Julia) goes back to China with him. This story claims the daughter-in-law said he had "no reason to stay here", and he agreed because he felt old and tired.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 23, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-41". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Daughter Alice Lillian married dentist Ed Hutchinson and sailed to Yokohama on the boat with her father.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 24, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-42". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Chuh Afong managed family investments in Hong Kong and Macao, with homes in both places. He was refused admittance in a "whites only" hotel in Macao, so he bought it.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 25, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-43". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Toney Afong had attended Iolani School for Boys, and preferred the wealthy social life in Hawaii, to the plantation work his father wanted him to have.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 26, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-44". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Toney opened a school. Children love it. Parents thought their children weren't learning anything.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 27, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-45". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
In China, Toney successfully ran the family businesses, but relocated to Hong Kong after his father died.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 28, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-46". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Sun Yat-sen had become acquainted with Toney while attending school in Hawaii. Clarice B. Taylor speculates that Toney secretly helped finance Dr. Sun Yat-sen's political activities.
Taylor, Clarice B. (November 30, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-47". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Sun Yat-sen appointed Toney governor of the city of Canton and Kwangtung Province. His Yale-graduate sons Chun Wing-Sen and Chun Wing-Keu joined forces with Dr. Sen. Chun Wing-Sen died in service to Dr. Sen. Chun Wing-Keu became VP of a Canton shipping firm.
Taylor, Clarice B. (December 1, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-48". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Toney (aka Chun Chick Yee) breaks with Sun Yat-Sen, resigned as governor 1930. Died Oct 18, 1936. Recounts Chun Afong's death and funeral.
Taylor, Clarice B. (December 2, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-49". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Jack London's stories of Chun Ah Chun in The House of Pride & Other Tales of Hawaii were based on Chun Afong.
Taylor, Clarice B. (December 3, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-50". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
All the Afong children in Hawaii were raised with western culture, neither Hawaiian nor Asian.
Taylor, Clarice B. (December 4, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-51". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Chun Afong wanted sons, not daughters. Julia hanai-d her first daughter Emmeline "to her own kahu Keaka, wife of Haulelio." Gerrit P. Judd did not approve of that Hawaiian custom. He ordered Keana and Haulelio to return the baby, so they and the baby moved in with the Afongs. Chun nicknamed Emmeline his "Thousand Pieces of Gold".
Taylor, Clarice B. (December 5, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-52". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Emmeline married lawyer John Alfred Magoon. Emmeline returned to Hawaii and carried on the family business.
Taylor, Clarice B. (December 7, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-53". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
The Magoons has 7 children. Lawyer Magoon had a heart attack and died.
Taylor, Clarice B. (December 8, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-54". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Nancy marries Francis Blately McStocker
Taylor, Clarice B. (December 9, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-55". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Mary Catherine Afong never married. After all the others married, Chun Afong's mansion was torn dow in 1902. The Chun property at Fort DeRussy Military Reservation now owned by the government.
Taylor, Clarice B. (December 10, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-56". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
Marie married Abram Stephanus Humphreys
Taylor, Clarice B. (December 11, 1953). "Story of the Afong Family-57". Honolulu Star-Bulletin. Retrieved January 21, 2019.
The intro section could use more a little more summary information about the milestones of his life and legacy.
I added a bunch a lot already. What other milestone do you think is missing?— Preceding unsigned comment added by KAVEBEAR (talk • contribs)
Some options (but not necessarily the exact wording) are: He was a co-owner of a chain of stores selling Oriental novelties. In 1856, Afong helped hosted a ball in honor of the wedding of King Kamehameha IV that helped to solidify the Chinese community's position in Honolulu. His political appointments. After his death, he was made a mandarin of the first rank by imperial edict and was acknowledged for his charitable contributions.–CaroleHenson (talk) 08:39, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Made the suggest changes.KAVEBEAR (talk) 08:51, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Excellent job! I really like the intro!–CaroleHenson (talk) 08:54, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Maybe 3 or so of those options.–CaroleHenson (talk) 08:44, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
In the infobox, is Meixi the same as Meixi Village? I see that you short-handed the place of death information, since it is the same as the place of birth. But, I wondered if Meixi is the same place.
It is the same. Added Village to make it less confusing.— Preceding unsigned comment added by KAVEBEAR (talk • contribs)
Is Qianshan Subdistrict the proper link for Qianshan Town in Xiangshan County, Guangdong?
If there is not an English language article, then the MOS guidelines for interlanguage links state that this template {{ill|English article title|language code|Title in foreign language}} should be used.
For example, if Qianshan Subdistrict is not the right place, Qianshan Town would look like: {{ill|Qianshan Town, Xiangshan County|zh|前山镇}} in wikicode and Qianshan Town, Xiangshan County [zh] as the reader would see it. (Qianshan Town redirects to a disambiguation page, so it needs to be differentiated in some manner.)–CaroleHenson (talk) 07:34, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
It is the same place. Qianshan was a 镇 which translates into town and was larger than a village.— Preceding unsigned comment added by KAVEBEAR (talk • contribs)
Excellent, thanks for the edit.–CaroleHenson (talk) 08:42, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I tweaked a link and fixed a cite order. Feel free, by the way, to remove links. They are suggestions and easier to add than typing out each one as a request/suggestion here.
Shouldn't "Marriage and children" be included in the Biography section? It may be that it was located at the bottom of the article because the content is in list form. If that's the reason, I understand.–CaroleHenson (talk) 08:16, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, I moved it down since it is such a long list. The marriage is explained in the main part of the article as well.— Preceding unsigned comment added by KAVEBEAR (talk • contribs)
The second half (or a bit more) of the first paragraph is about the larger Chun family estate, and not really about his legacy. Should this be its own section?
The second and third paragraphs are interesting, but they aren't really about his legacy. Perhaps the second and third paragraph could go into the same section as the Chun family estate in China. Perhaps titled Residences... or Estates. What do you think?–CaroleHenson (talk) 08:29, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
It is kind of loosely about what he left behind (what I mean by legacy) and how he is remembered through the plaque at his former residence, the lychee trees in Hawaii, the museum of his family estate and the archway.— Preceding unsigned comment added by KAVEBEAR (talk • contribs)
Please sign your comments. That would help a lot to keep track of the conversation.–CaroleHenson (talk) 08:47, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Just thinking... maybe there's a broader title for this section... or perhaps a subsection for his residences/trees. Think about it. We can chat more tomorrow.–CaroleHenson (talk) 08:51, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Added subheading of "Former residences and memorials" which encompasses everything KAVEBEAR (talk) 08:55, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I added a few links. Please check Imperialism, which seemed to be to be the closest to what the impact of "white capitalist establishment" would be in colonial Hawaii. Capitalist doesn't capture the paradigm. Of course, please remove any links you don't find appropriate.–CaroleHenson (talk) 21:29, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
It would be helpful to match up the families with their residences. For instance, I assume that his first wife lived in China on the large family estate... and his second wife lived in the villa in Hawaii. Did he provide a home for his concubine?
How so? They are in different sections and given how rich he was he had multiple houses throughout his lifetime. It seems trivial.KAVEBEAR (talk) 21:44, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
For Chan Lung, "He graduated from Yale University and co-partner with his father in his business in Hawaii." a wording change is needed, like to "co-partnered" or "was co-partner".
More out of curiosity than anything else, do you know if Helen Gertrude Afong's husbands were brothers?
Not sure, not mentioned although I can look.
No worries. If that was the case, it would likely have been mentioned.–CaroleHenson (talk) 21:58, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
For consistency in approach re: people with second marriages, "Caroline Bartlett Afong (1874–1942), married first Jacob Morton Riggs and married secondly Leonard Camp. No children from both marriages." should have a semi-colon after Riggs, right?–CaroleHenson (talk) 21:39, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Is it possible to add the English language titles parenthetically for the last link(s) with Chinese labels?–CaroleHenson (talk) 08:16, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Changed and it was also another deadlink but I was able to find an archived version of it.— Preceding unsigned comment added by KAVEBEAR (talk • contribs)
Excellent, thanks! I am calling it a night (or morning). But, I will be back tomorrow to finish up.–CaroleHenson (talk) 08:50, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Notes: "Dye's wife Tessa Gay Magoon was a great-great granddaughter of Chun Afong." is redundant. That sentence was stated in the Literary representation section two times - once in the body of that section and again as a parenthetical in the quote.–CaroleHenson (talk) 21:45, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
Yes, the content is verifiable.–CaroleHenson (talk) 21:54, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
There is no evidence of original research, but there is at least one place where there are several citations at the end of the paragraph (The Former residences and memorials section, first paragraph). So, I will double-check.–CaroleHenson (talk) 21:54, 5 April 2020 (UTC) This is Done and looks good!–CaroleHenson (talk) 22:16, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Copyvio only picked up quotes and titles, except one sentence that I will add to the comments section below.–CaroleHenson (talk) 21:54, 5 April 2020 (UTC) This is now Done.–CaroleHenson (talk) 23:03, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Please paraphrase "He died peacefully, on September 25, 1906, in his home village of Meixi." It is the same verbiage as in this source.–CaroleHenson (talk) 21:54, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
KAVEBEAR, Thanks so much for the great job that you did on the article. As I said elsewhere, you made it very easy to review. It was also very interesting! I love the way that he sought to bring the cultures together.
If you could just paraphrase the one sentence, we'll be done. Probably the most that can be done is scrambling the order of the words, using a synonym for peaceful, etc.–CaroleHenson (talk) 22:20, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]