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I work for Rubenstein and on behalf of Clifton Daniel, I'd like to propose the follow updates and additions to the article. To mitigate conflict of interest issues, I ask that an editor please review and either give feedback and/or edit accordingly.

  • Add to end of the lead section:

He currently serves as the Dean of the Cathedral of Saint John the Divine.[1]

  • Add to end of Ordained ministry section:

On June 20, 2018, Daniel was appointed 10th Dean of the Cathedral of Saint John the Divine in New York City.[2]

  • Corrections to Personal life section:

Possible to add (her death) to the end of the first sentence?

Update Charlotte Holloman Daniel's name, which also appears in the death notice citation currently on the page:

Charlotte Daniel Coletti (husband, Michael Coletti)

NinaSpezz (talk) 16:22, 2 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Stapinski, Helene (August 30, 2018). "Secret Doorways, Gargoyles and Wood-Carved Angels: Cleaning Out the Cathedral Basement". The New York Times. ...is undergoing a slow rehabilitation under the direction of Dean Daniel, who was appointed permanent dean in June.
  2. ^ "Clifton Daniel III appointed 10th Dean of the Cathedral Church of Saint John the Divine". Episcopal News Service. June 20, 2018.

Reply 02-OCT-2018

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  Edit request partially implemented  

  1. Green tickY Daniel's current position was added to the lead.
  2. Green tickY Current position and date of appointment added to Ordained ministry section.
  3. Green tickY Daniel's wife's death was appended to the sentence under Personal life section.
  4. Red XN Daniel's children's names were omitted, per WP:BLPNAME.[1]
Regards,  Spintendo  18:56, 2 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons - (WP:BLPNAME)". Wikipedia. 29 September 2018. Retrieved 2 October 2018. When the name of a private individual has not been widely disseminated it is often preferable to omit it, especially when doing so does not result in a significant loss of context. When deciding whether to include a name, its publication in secondary sources other than news media, such as scholarly journals or the work of recognized experts, should be afforded greater weight than the brief appearance of names in news stories.