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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:45, 7 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • I am considering quickfailing this for length. It is 93327 characters and WP:SIZE suggests 30-50 kb. WP:SPLIT strongly suggests splitting articles over 60 KB. I do not believe the article should be passed with over 60kb of readable prose. This will require an overhaul of the article and may result in two separate GACs. I await a second opinion before failing.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:45, 7 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Dr. Blofeld and I have definitely talked about this, and I haven't had time since it was nominated to start whittling things down. To start, in my sandbox, I'll strike through elements that I don't think are essential for his main article (but can still be covered in subarticles or the film articles themselves). I'll give it a run-through once and see if Blofeld agrees with the trimming. That will help to reduce the length of the article. We also need to take note that Eastwood has starred in multiple films in various capacities over several decades. To be concise is challenging, but we also don't need to completely meet the kb thresholds if we want to ensure comprehensiveness for FAC down the line. A lot of that comes from sourcing, and trimming will definitely take that down. Let's try a day or two to see how much can be removed in an initial sweep. --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 06:32, 7 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
If we are going to prune rather than split, you may need 3 or 4 new subarticles with {{mainarticle}} headings for major sections. Please WP:PRESERVE content.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:09, 7 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
It looks like there already are multiple articles already split out on Eastwood, so that's not the issue. As for length though, yeah 90kb is overkill for anyone. Trimming should not be a problem since subarticles do exist. Even a trim to 70 would be alright for me. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:21, 7 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I will insist it be reduced to 60 or less to be promoted to WP:GA.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:44, 7 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Everything that I've seen on Wikipedia has had becoming a featured article being tougher than become a good article. And yet as far as I can tell, 2007 USC Trojans football team made featured article while being well more than 100k.Naraht (talk) 18:14, 7 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I don't see length as being a reason for quick fail. FA 2007 USC Trojans football team ia a Featured Article and is 157 KB CTJF83 chat 18:28, 7 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Clint_Eastwood#Film_career could definitely be cut way back, and made into it's own article. Shortening that section would cut the article down to a third or so. CTJF83 chat 18:32, 7 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
USC Trojans is only 65 KB of readable prose. If it were to undergo a review, it would probably be encouraged to be under 60KB as well. This is 93KB or readable prose.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:19, 7 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Although the article does not appear on Special:LongPages, according to User:Dr_pda/Featured_article_statistics, which measures readable prose, of the 3122 WP:FAs only 90 are longer than 60KB of readable prose. That is less than 3%. Note that as of December 23, the aforementioned 2007 USC Trojans football team was only 69KB of readable prose according to that tool. I see no reason why Clint Eastwood should have an article longer than 97% of the most well-crafted articles on wikipedia. I intend to stick to my guns with 60 KB.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:50, 7 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Taking a preliminary look, with my suggested initial sandbox trimming, the article could be reduced by ~144kb to ~93. I'm sure more can be removed (and not everyone may agree with what I would trim, so some of that may come back). However, mostly by removing those details, I think having it under 80kb overall would be sufficient for GA requirements. --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 01:59, 8 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
You will need more subarticles for the more recent decades. When it gets close to 60KB, I will start a more formal review.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:15, 8 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I seriously doubt the article could be cut as short as 60kb without it seriously affecting the comprehensiveness of the article. We have featured articles which are at least eight!! times the recommended length like List of Chinese inventions. Since when has there been a rule that articles should be 60kb max?? I agree with Nehrams I think we should be aiming for about 80kb with this, and even that would be a very filtered version. I'll see how it goes Down to 130kb at the moment. I disagree with Ctif83's comments below, we should not completely reduce the film career down to a mere few paragraphs but we can certainly do some major cutting to ensure that it is comprehensive and concise. ♦ Dr. Blofeld 23:07, 8 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I have seen those arguments at Barack Obama (currently 40765 KB readable prose), John McCain (52247KB). Proper use of subarticles is the solution. Don't try to convince me that Clint Eastwood should really have an article that more than 50% longer than Obamas. Look under the infobox at Obama and see the series technique. Create such a box and start pruning and moving. It can be done. It is arduous. The Hillary Clinton people fought me on a strict 60KB ruling, but it is now inching closer to 70KB and I may take it up with them again soon (68263KB). I just don't see any reason to ask the reader to read much more than 60KB to find out about this guy. I am a fan, but his article is too long. Yes a little longer than 60 KB is tolerable. It is not necessary, but tolerable. You could move text out to subarticles and shorten it.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:28, 9 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
To be clear. Close would be at least as short as 2007 USC Trojans football team in terms of readable prose.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:47, 8 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I definitely think the "film career" section should be majorly cut to a few paragraphs total, and the rest to its own page. CTJF83 chat 04:48, 8 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

In the words of Clint Eastwood "you may run the risks my friend but I do the cutting". I'll do the "cutting" tomorrow. Give me a day or two on it.♦ Dr. Blofeld 21:00, 8 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Take your time. I am working on a script. I intend to send it of to the Writers Guild of America, West on Thursday or Friday if I don't suffer writer's block. I won't be dealing extensively with this article until next weekend. Please take your time WP:PRESERVEing content in sub articles. I think you may need some articles for more recent decades.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 21:46, 8 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Dr. B, I got your note on my talk page. Thanks for your work in cutting this one down to size. It is now 48414 bytes of readable prose. 48KB is what we are looking for on a subject like this. Regarding Preity Zinta, the article is only 32240 of readable prose and Changeling (film) is only 57537. Both are well within the guidelines I am concerned about. You mentioned that you feel Nehrams may still be at work in pruning this. That is fine. It is going to take me a few days to dig into this one, so I will await word that he is finished too. P.S. create and add a series template for under his infobox like at Barack Obama.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:14, 9 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

If you read the GA criteria, it does not include article length. So long as the prose is well-written and the article remains focused, length itself is not a basis for objection. It may be for FA, but not GA. Racepacket (talk) 21:41, 10 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Although it is moot now that the article as been duly revised, are you saying that article size does not fall within 1(b) at WP:WIAGA.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 21:53, 10 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I would never quickfail for being too long - only for being so short that it leaves out important material. SIZE is already not a fixed policy but one that is always subject to specific evaluations. Lots of other GA's are longer - which shows that other reviewers also do not consider this to be a problem. ·Maunus·ƛ· 19:50, 11 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Like I said it is moot. The article is now well within the desired range. Regarding lots of other GA's longer then 93KB of readable prose, I doubt even 1% of all GAs are that long. Many of those have endured creep from smaller size articles.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:00, 11 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
As one more outside opinion, I have carefully read the specific sections of the MOS referred to under 1(b), and I can't see any portion of any of them that refers to article length or incorporates the article length policies. I'd therefore have to say that you can't fail an article for GA on the basis of length. - DustFormsWords (talk) 00:30, 18 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
We are way past any size issue the article has been shrunk from 93,000 characters of readable prose to 54,000 characters. Maybe I should remove the 2nd opinion request.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:49, 18 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The major overhaul seems to be complete. I assume you are ready for a review of the current content. I will make sure it is stable for another 48 hours and then give it a look. There is still one problematic link showing in the toolbox above, however.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:15, 11 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I did some cleanup and added citations for the fact tags. It looks to me like it's ready for an initial review. For the requested page number tag for Munn, I'll address that before FAC (the book's in my Amazon waiting list). Blofeld will have to add the page numbers for current citation 194. --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 06:59, 11 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I've reread this article today with the intent on reducing it further but really at 88kb (48 kb of readable prose) this is now a finely tuned article and a comprehensive coverage. To reduce the length much further would mean an attack on its comprehensiveness and would affect quality I think. If you read the article through its an effective summary I think and certainly doesn't warble or cover certain things excessively...♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:25, 13 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

(ec) The article is now 47193 bytes (~46.1KB) of readable prose. At 46KB, it is well within the desired range. Readable prose is the issue. I will sit on this for another 24 hours to monitor stability and then start a review tomorrow night.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:28, 13 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I've given it a reread and in order to make it the best I can I had to readd/add some material which I thought was important to his career so the length has crept up a little but only 4-5kb and most of that is improved sourcing. I must have added about ten new sources to it today.♦ Dr. Blofeld 19:08, 13 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Sources don't add readable prose. Keep adding them.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:37, 13 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I've added more reviews and improved the quality of the Eastwood article further, a lot more wider sources than previously now. The quotes I added I think are very important to understanding his film techiques and most acclaimed performances. Its currently on 98kb but I'm now much happier than previously as I've improved the 1990s and 2000s sections now which were its weakest. We are waiting for you review of it now anyway. I anticipate some issues (mostly MOS) but I'll let you identify them in the review.♦ Dr. Blofeld 23:05, 13 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

It is still only 51262 characters (~50.06KB). It is in good shape. I'll take a look after I think it has settled a bit. Probably tomorrow night, but with your latest edits, I might wait until Saturday.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:51, 14 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Formal review[edit]

I am going to make a few comments tonight and then dig into this a bit more tomorrow.

LEAD
  • Does he have a middle name?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:19, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Right now the WP:LEAD is a mess. The first paragraph should tell the reader all the basics of his life. It excludes his role as a politician for some reason. I would suggest that paragraphs two through four include a summary of each main section of the article and that paragraph one summarize these three paragraphs. Ideally we would have four equal sized paragraphs.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:41, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I strongly disagree with that. The whole introduction should summarize his life/career which is given in the article no in one sentence. Every FA on a film biography I've contributed to like Abbas Kiarostami, Preity Zinta etc does not summarise it in one paragraph but several and looking at our others FAs they don't either. I think I sort of see what you mean though, I've reworded the intro now in a fashion which may be more desirable to you.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:13, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I don't follow. It informs the reader that he won Academy Awards and says which films they were for. ANyway I've restructured the intro now so this particular problem may have been solved.. ♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:15, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I think it assumes that he had his first major role in Rawhide, but you have not told the reader that yet. The second paragraph should have a sentence saying, he worked his way up from smaller roles to a regular character on Rawhide, which was a successful show. Then get into what is there.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:48, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I've now mentioned it was his breakthrough role, thats enough/♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:53, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I've trimmed the intro, should be OK now.
It is now only 1700 chars and two paras. We optimally would have (three or) four paras totalling between 2500 and 3000 characters.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:48, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Tony this is a Good article nom, not an FA nom. Show me the criteria that GA leads must be between 2500 and 3000. Anyway I've expanded it a bit and split into three paragraphs. ♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:46, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

It is shaping up. It summarizes the article pretty well. I want to hold off on striking this until I feel the article is closer to final form. I.e., pending other review elements.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:12, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • I would move "Throughout his five-decade career, he has received five Academy Awards, five Golden Globe Awards, a Screen Actors Guild Life Achievement Award, two Cannes Film Festival awards, and five People's Choice Awards, among other accolades." to the end of the first para, which might solve almost the whole problem.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:02, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Agreed, I've moved it to first paragraph.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:30, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • I am a little confused on what constitutes critical success in the WP:LEAD. I am not so sure finding a few positive clippings constitutes success. I think nominations that are the result of a consensus of a panel, membership, committee, organization or the like are the proper standard. Even movies that are consensus duds can find a few reviews that make them seem good. Look at rotten tomatoes. If something gets a 15% rating that means there are a bunch of positive reviews out there. I question whether the movies listed in the LEAD in the 70s were critical successes in this regard. Please clarify otherwise in the text or revise the lead. I just don't see someone describing a movie that got no notable nominations as a critical success.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:11, 17 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    Critical success also refers to reception amongst individual film critics unless I'm mistaken. The only film in the lead which wasn't very well received by critics initially is High Plains Drifter, but has gradually earned more respect over the years, so much in fact that it now has a 96% rating on Rotten Tomatoes. If what is a "critical success" is to be decided by award nominations then you can virtually exclude every film pre 1990 which is not a balanced reflection of his career.♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:54, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • The WP:LEAD is a summary of the main text. If you tell the reader a film is a critical success in the LEAD, you must give details on that claim in the article. For the early films such as High Plains Drifter, you have to establish in the main text why you made such a claim in the lead with detailed sourced facts.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:31, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Early life
Agreed, I've removed the sentence entirely, not essential.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:17, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Early career struggles
We don't have an article about the TV series.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:37, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Should be fixed♦ Dr. Blofeld 21:02, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • It looks like you missed a lot of interesting jobs.
    Some of those jobs not already listed in the early life section are for when he was in between film work. For example, while he was doing his early film roles, he dug swimming pools. --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 05:06, 18 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    That kind of detail belongs somewhere on WP. If not in the main article in the daughter articles.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:24, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    I added additional details in the subpage about his early life for what sources I have on the listed jobs. --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 18:57, 22 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
1960
Should all be fixed throughout article. ♦ Dr. Blofeld 21:02, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I think you missed the first one ($100/week). Also, if greater than a Million just use millions like US$8.7 million.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:35, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Done♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:17, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Still have to fix all the millions.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:26, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I fixed the formatting, so the numbers should be clearer for readers. --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 05:54, 18 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Why no conversions for Heartbreak Ridge and Dead Pool?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:28, 18 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I only replaced the existing inflation templates. I've now added the templates for these to films, while fixing the formatting on another. --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 00:23, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
1970s
1980s
1990s
  • Move the quote to one side. Done♦ Dr. Blofeld 21:02, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Does Comandeur de L' Ordre des Arts et des Lettres have a link? -Fixed.♦ Dr. Blofeld 21:18, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • You should highlight The Bridges of Madison County's awards, at least the GG Best Picture.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:38, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
The awards it won are not really notable but I have now mentioned the Golden Globe nomination for Best Picture and Streep's Academy Award and GG noms which are relevant as Eastwood directed the film.♦ Dr. Blofeld 21:31, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry. I misread the page. I thought it won GG Best Picture. You may also want to mention that it had a César Award best foreign film nom since you talked about how Clint was a hit in other countries and since not many of his films were that highly esteemed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:49, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Done.♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:55, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
How about changing "The Bridges of Madison County was nominated for a Golden Globe for Best Picture and won a César Award in France for Best Foreign Film." to The Bridges of Madison County was nominated for a Golden Globe for Best Picture, won several Best Foreign Language Film awards in Japan and earned a César Award nomination in France for Best Foreign Film.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:24, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Also, is this one of the films that should be mentioned as a commmercial and critical success in the LEAD?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:24, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Did it win the Cesar or get a nom?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:02, 17 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Done and sourced.♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:06, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
2000s
  • Link FBI
    Linked. --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 07:16, 17 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Don't link names more than once (Sutherland).
    Done♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:16, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Convert $26.2 million on an estimated budget of $50 million :Done♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:16, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Link to award articles for "The film won two Academy Awards, Best Actor for Penn and Best Supporting Actor for Robbins, with Eastwood garnering nominations for Best Director and Best Picture" or upon first use.:Done♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:16, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • I am trying to decide whether we should link to California Governor and French President articles. What do you think?
    Not really important but have done anyway...♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:16, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • What was his highest adjusted gross?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:10, 16 January 2011 (UTC)For what??♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:40, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • The Gran Torino article, the discography and this article all give different impressions on Clint's involvment in the music. Can we get that squared away.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:05, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is it notable that this had a GG Best Original Song nom since Clint did the music?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:03, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • The article still has room for encyclopedic content. I would like some more clarity on critical acclaim on his films:
    • Invictus GG BD nom
    • Gran Torino AFI ten best, (consider mentioning minor best actor accolades)
    • Changeling NBR ten best, BAFTA nom, Best O score, Maybe London Film critics.
    • Flags of Our Fathers NBR ten best, GG BD nom
    • Letters from Iwo Jima Golden Globe Award for Best Foreign Language Film, which may need an explanation. I don't recall subtitles. Also, Oscar and GG BD noms.
    • I could keep going I think. Basically, the article has room to be 10% longer and there is quality encyclopedic content worth mentioning. Please adequately summarize critical acclaim for his works. Also summarize his critical acclaim regarding musical accomplishments somewhere. It seems he may have at least two notable musical critical reviews.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:14, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Oh I'm sure you could keep going, but bear in mind this is only a GA review.... It doesn't need to be perfect. ♦ Dr. Blofeld 21:32, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Do you expect me to say this passes WP:WIAGA item 3 if you don't tell the readers which films received which types of critical acclaim for Eastwood.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:05, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
We should cover some of these above, but I don't think each film needs to include all the mentions. That would push off on POV concerns (which so far I think does a good job balancing out with the included poor reviews and awards). Also, there is a separate list for all of his awards, so to help with size constraints, readers are encouraged to visit that page to pursue further information. --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 22:29, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I've added the most important awards. I really don't think it is necessary to mention every minor award. I think its pretty comprehensive now. There might be too many links though to the awards, more than once. If you spot any Tony please take the liberty to fix them.♦ Dr. Blofeld 14:10, 17 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Politics
  • Do you have a ref for "During his term, he had a tendency to support small business interests and advocate environmental protection."--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:12, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Added two sources.♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:49, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Personal
  • swimming champion seems a bit vague.
    Not really.♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:49, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    I removed the mention as her swimming and film work credits weren't really that notable (and to help cut down on the list a bit). --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 18:57, 22 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • still having problems with citation spacing (1988. [234]The). No space between citation and preceding text, but space after citation.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:23, 16 January 2011 (UTC) :Done♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:16, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    • See ref 1 for starters.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:46, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
      I actually enjoy spotting and fixing these, and I think I've caught them all. I've already been fixing them intermittently as new content was added and other details taken out. I'll keep an eye on any others. --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 07:16, 17 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Music
  • Why was this moved from a discography section to a subsection?
  • Why is there no summary of his award nominations in this section?
Because it was supposed to be his personal life/other work content, not career content. But now that the discography is merged its need elaborating.♦ Dr. Blofeld 22:50, 17 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I started to write a summary of the discography section, and realized there was a lot of duplication with his music subsection. I merged the two to keep the overlapping details in one place. As his work on music is not extensive as his other career roles, I added the link for his brief discography to this section where all of the music details are covered. --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 05:54, 18 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The "discrepancy" has now been covered with music awards. How much longer do we have to preen this article?♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:28, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Ending sections
Clint Eastwood filmography is an FL. It would be unfeasible to move it back into the main articlr.♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:30, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Not sure such a short discography should be on a separate page either although it is conventional to have separate discographies.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:32, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Its fine.♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:30, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Awards and honors

What do you mean by a "complete rundown". You're becoming tedious and rather obsessed with awards. There is really no need for a complete rundown in the main article.♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:01, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Something like "Eastwood has been awarded six honorary degrees from University 1....and University 6" would be nice if it were available. It would be encyclopedic if a complete list existed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:35, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Unnecessary. The article is already encyclopedic and comprehensive enough. Many of his honors are really not worth mentioning. We've definitely mentioned the most important in various places in the article including his doctor of music degree in the music section which I've added recently. To expect us to tally every single award or honor he ever won with a figure is absurd. He has likely received many more honors from various universities which haven't been reported or are obscure, its impossible to count them I think. Personally I don't think some of the nominations we've mentioned are really necessary but for the fact that you urged them.♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:47, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I am just saying that a complete list of honorary degrees would be encyclopedic. The current text does not indicate whether the schools listed represent the whole list or a sample.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:46, 21 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
This weekend, I will make a GA Checklist review. Please try to address any remaining concerns above before that.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:48, 21 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Checklist[edit]

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
    Current length: 56240 KB readable prose. Length is no issue as long as we stay under 60KB. We just need the text to clarify the main points of the LEAD.
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Its a commons image, what are yout talking about?? As for fair use images, a limited number of fair use images to identify the most important roles of the actor are accepted in featured articles like Preity Zinta and Cillian Murphy. Eastwood's roles as the Man with No Name and Dirty Harry are iconic and should most certainly have images in the article.♦ Dr. Blofeld 13:17, 23 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • The image may be considered sculptural. Sculptures have very strict Fair use guidelines. We will probably need a 2nd opinion.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:59, 23 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think you might be right about the iconic images. However unless the Yates role is important enough to have its own article, I am not sure.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:57, 23 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Although it is not required for this to pass, could you take care of putting those iconic images in the articles that they really belong in and creating FURs.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:59, 23 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Look I appreciate that you want the article improved but the issues you've highlighted are really not essential for this to pass GA. As a GA reviewer you really shouldn't be expecting this. I've replaced one of the images. Asking us to add a personality rights template and even questioning the image somebody took back in 1979 of the bench during production is a little extreme... I've improved the article this afternoon and believe it is now more comprehensive in the politics and awards section but is probably now exceeding your "guideline" of 60 kb of readable prose. There might be a few ref and links needing sorting in that section now but I believe this is easily meeting good article requirements.♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:08, 23 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    On hold

Remaining issues:

  • Middle name unknown (not a GA requirement)
  • I have issue with the WP:LEAD claiming films were success without supporting text in the main body verifying these claims. I think all the pre-1990s films need to have the text in the main body reevaluated to make sure they support the critical success claims in the LEAD. Critical success of Gran Torino not established in main text. See suggestion above. I don't really feel the text backs up the claim of In The Line of Fire, Play Misty for Me, High Plains Drifter, The Outlaw Josey Wales and Escape from Alcatraz as critical successes. Presenting individual critics as support is a very low threshold. I think every film has multiple critics that speak positively about it since I have never seen a rotten tomatoes rating below 10 or 15%. Explain to me why each should be allowed to remain in the LEAD.

Because they were all well received by critics. High Plains Drifter though as I say only gained critical respect much later so maybe should be removed. I'll find some more reviews to back them up in the article.. I believe I've addressed this now. I've removed high plains and in the line of fire and added text in the article to show critical acclaim.♦ Dr. Blofeld 13:46, 23 January 2011 (UTC)♦ Dr. Blofeld 13:26, 23 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

    • The Gran Torino article says. "An original song from the film, "Gran Torino", was nominated for the Golden Globe Awards for Best Original Song. The music is by Clint Eastwood, Jamie Cullum, Kyle Eastwood, and Michael Stevens, with Cullum penning the lyrics.". Clint's bio says "He also wrote and performed the song heard over the credits of Gran Torino." These are two different levels of involvement that need to be squared away.
That's the fault of the Gran Torino article not this which I've now corrected.♦ Dr. Blofeld 13:26, 23 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Would feel better with some clarification of the honorary degrees he has been awarded. Does the current text include all of them? (not required)--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:12, 23 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

No it isn't required.♦ Dr. Blofeld 13:26, 23 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I don't think he does oddly enough... I'll check. Mmm Kyle has a son about aged 14 or so from his first marriage but I can't find a reliable source for it... ♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:06, 25 January 2011 (UTC) What's funny about this is that Auriscalpium vulgare has beaten Clint Eastwood to being a GA and is barely a week old and has one tenth of the sources... ♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:34, 25 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Complain all you want, but we have to get the image issues right. Tagging images is not optional. Would also be nice to know about grandchildren although it is doubtful they are notable if they have not already been mentioned.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:41, 25 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I am disappointed in the haste with which you handled the image issues. Regarding File:ClintEastwood.JPG, although it has been removed from this article, there is no reason to leave a FUR for this article there. There is also no reason why the image should not be in each of the films for which the Man with No Name appeared. This should be regarded as an attempt to improve WP with respect to this topic and not a race to get a GA. Since you care enough about this topic to do this bio and I care enough about it to review, it I would hope you could take care of these non-required issues. I can not fail this article for failure to remove a FUR on an image that has been removed from the article, but come on let's do things right around here. It would not be beyond a reasonable effort to help WP on this topic to include File:Clint Eastwood man with no name.jpg at Dollars Trilogy and spaghetti Western.
I am also disappointed at the haste with which File:Eastwoodrawhide.jpg, File:CAHoF Entrance.jpg and File:Malpaso prod (bench).jpg were removed. The former clearly should have its FUR removed if it is no longer at Eastwood and should be at Rawhide (TV series) (with a FUR). However, in all three cases (especially the former and the latter), there is a good shot that an image expert would allow them to stay. Why not request a 2nd opinion rather than remove possibly appropriate encyclopedic content. The latter should be at Malpaso Productions, which is curiously absent from the template below the infobox. This article could pass GA as is if there were any time concerns. There are not, and I see no reason to resolve issues hastily rather than optimally.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:20, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I apologize for making requests of your time that are beyond the required elements for this nomination.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:25, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Also, why is Malpaso Productions absent from both the template and the LEAD?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:42, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Is that essential for this to pass GA? Really... I'm tempted to open up an RFC on good article reviewing as what you've demanded in this review (and its duration) exceeds what other reviewers demand for a good article by at least ten times. There needs to be firmer guidelines which stops reviewers demanding excess. I would rather spend the time promoting other actor and film articles to GA. ♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:20, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

What is going on with recently added images in terms of tagging? File:Clint and Dina Eastwood.jpg, File:Frances Fisher at the 2010 Independent Spirit Awards.jpg, File:Clint Eastwood DOI 1675.jpg, File:ClintEastwood6.jpg, and File:Eastwood1981.jpg.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:10, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
In terms of demanding excess. The article is still hung up on basic tagging of images. The other image stuff is stuff that in the heat of the moment you wish I would just pass over. I hope your co-editor is more responsive to reasonable requests to improve the article and topic in general. I am going to assume if you refuse to do basic FUR removal that your co-editor will have enough gumption to do it and will wait 48 hours for him to do some basic stuff that will help people who want to read about this BLP of an American hero and icon. It is all stuff that with a good internet connection can be handled in a total of twenty minutes (except for waiting for responses on the questionable images). If I were to look at this in terms of a final decision, probably only the tagging is required. It would be nice if since we have created a whole bunch of supporting articles that we would move pictures to the right supporting articles when we move them out of here though. If both you and your co-author demand an pass/fail decision without doing anything beyond getting the tagging right, I will grant one.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:10, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I've been working on securing some free images for several articles recently (including this one), so I apologize for not helping to look at these images earlier. I found one from him in 1970, and have contacted the Florida Archive office to see if we can potentially add two other images of better angles. Although it seems tedious, these images do need to be resolved, and the earlier the better, as it helps us to look to see what areas we need to search for potential images (also, better now than FAC, which will probably be a long enough nomination as is). I've had some long reviews for GAs as well (some for Tony as well, so he may finally be getting back at me!), but we do need to realize that the comments are for the bettter on the FA path. For the most part, it looks like the images have been solved, and I'll keep looking for finding additional free images where possible. --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 03:45, 27 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • QUESTION/NOTE: I'm obviously not the primary reviewer, but I was reading this article and noticed one thing under "Politics". "During the 2008 United States Presidential Election, Eastwood endorsed John McCain for President; he has known McCain since 1973, but wishes Barack Obama the very best upon his victory." That sentence reads incredibly awkwardly to me, could it get fixed up? At very least shouldn't the wish be in the past tense (but wished Barack Obama the very best upon his victory)? More fundamentally it just doesn't read like an encyclopedia sentence. Cool stuff though, I never knew he was a mayor at one point. Staxringold talkcontribs 22:14, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

It was a typo, it was supposed to be wished not wishes. Well I don't want the reader thinking he is anti-Obama, that's why I think it important to mention his positive comment towards Obama.♦ Dr. Blofeld 23:02, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • That's fine, but it still reads somewhat unprofessionally if it isn't a quote. If it is a quote (something like "I wish Obama the very best") I would put in actual quotation marks to make it clear. And either way I would make the bit starting at "He has known McCain since..." into a 2nd sentence. Staxringold talkcontribs 02:18, 27 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Third opinion on images[edit]

I haven't read GA review, but I note a third opinion is requested on the subject of images, so I'm going to give the article a vaguely FAC style image review. Any pic currently in the article I don't mention is fine.

For such an important article, it'd be great if the illustrations were squeaky-clean copyright-wise. J Milburn (talk) 22:26, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Ya it did once discuss his clothing but it got removed during the condensing...♦ Dr. Blofeld 22:49, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

That's fair enough, I assumed as much. Thanks for taking the NFCC seriously! J Milburn (talk) 22:55, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for you image assessment, I agree. I do suspect the 1954 image is not public domain... The bench also really doesn't add anything of informational value. I've removed the fair use images and marked them for deletion. You're an admin right Milburn, can you delete them? So no need to remove rationales Tony... The Dirty Harry wall image and artists rendition of Man with No Name are far from perfect but seem OK unless of course people claim that a wall in a public place is copyrighted... ♦ Dr. Blofeld 22:56, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

It could well be... It wouldn't technically be covered by freedom of panorama in the US (I assume the pic was in the US), but I know it's something people like to scrap about on Commons. J Milburn (talk) 23:35, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Actually, it was taken in Mexico, where there is full freedom of panorama (I've tagged it). Unless someone is going to argue it's copyrighted as a derivative work of the film, I reckon we're good here. J Milburn (talk) 00:19, 27 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

If I'm honest, I'm not keen on the newly added File:Clint Eastwood man with no name.jpg. It could be argued to be a derivative work, and, if not, perhaps suffers from OR issues. It doesn't look that professional- who's a random Flickr user to say what The Man With No Name looks like? We occasionally have free images from trailers in this period- is that something that has been looked into? J Milburn (talk) 00:23, 27 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Did you have an opinion on File:CAHoF Entrance.jpg, which is a picture inside a museum?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 01:25, 27 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
For the trailers, that was up to 1960 (I believe), and I tried searching for the trailers for all his films prior to that point. Unfortunately, some don't exist (or haven't been posted to the Internet) or don't feature him in the trailer (he had small roles at this point). In addition, the Dollars Trilogy is an Italian film, so I don't know what the copyright is for their trailers for that period in time (all after 1960). --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 03:45, 27 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Interestingly most films pre 1980 have expired copyright in Italy so the images of the original Italian movie are publid domain there but there is a problem with US copyright I think. Somebody might want to look into that. I hate the vector picture in all honesty... ♦ Dr. Blofeld 23:36, 27 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Template:PD-URAA may be of interest there. J Milburn (talk) 00:04, 28 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Tony, no great concern. The copyrighted elements are small enough that they're ok to include, and, though the museum may well have a "no photographs" policy, that won't impact upon the copyright status. Nehrams, to be considered free on the English Wikipedia, images need only to be in the public domain in the US; it's possible you would be able to upload images with {{PD-US-no notice}} and {{Do not move to Commons}}. J Milburn (talk) 09:55, 27 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Milburn I uploaded File:Eastwood Good Bad and the Ugly.png from here but the licensing need reversing. It is public domain in Italy and the image is taken from the Italian version of the film. Can you sort out the licensing? I really don't see why it isn't public domain elsewhere... It is 100 times better quality than the vector image.. We really suffer with film images on here. How awesome would it be to have all of those images.... ♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:24, 28 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
The Bobby Orr GAC is awaiting resolution of two images. One is very similar. Can you comment at Commons:Deletion requests/File:HHOF1999-Orr.jpg regarding a similar issue. Wouldn't mind a comment on the other issue at Commons:Deletion requests/File:Bobby Orr Star on Canada's Walk of Fame.jpg as well.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:26, 27 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
What is the status of the image tagging?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:15, 29 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I hope this image is tagged correctly, but the image page could do with more information. Other than that, it's good. J Milburn (talk) 20:58, 29 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Final thoughts[edit]

Thanks for all the efforts at improving the article. We have moved it well up the quality scale. Shrinking it from 93327 characters to 60700 (approximately 60700/1024=59.28 KB) brings it within the desirable range of less than 60 KB of readable prose. All images in the article is fine and a lot of text was moved out to daughter articles. I did not really check that content was WP:PRESERVED at these articles. It would also be good if the daughter articles contained all content in the final version of this since they are suppose to have greater detail. Images were moved and removed from this article. Many of these would be well-placed at related articles. Also, FURs linger at some of these images. However, none of these issues bear on this GAC. If this is headed toward FAC, try to find a middle name in some of the legal records mentioned in the article. Also, since he has so many WP:N offspring a rundown of grandchildren might be appropriate since some of them may pass WP:N now or in the future. I am going to pass this as it is since our visiting expert image reviewer is on board.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:15, 30 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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