Talk:Clumber Spaniel/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Mike - Μολὼν λαβέ 01:32, 16 December 2009 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
Appearance section andfirst paragraph of temperament need a little work,appearance is good, but a bit repetitive with the word Heavy.I'll give you time to work on these.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- Very good in this regard.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Images need "ALT TEXT"
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Managed to reduce the "heavy"s in appearance down to two, and added inline citations for the first couple of lines of temperament - although I re-wrote one section so that it didn't seem like everything was coming from the same source. Miyagawa (talk) 23:35, 16 December 2009 (UTC)