Talk:Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly
Did you know nomination[edit]
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... that the lo-fi music of Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly and its prequel perfectly complimented the entire experience? Source: https://www.digitallydownloaded.net/2023/04/review-coffee-talk-episode-2-hibiscus-butterfly-pc.htmlALT1: ... that both Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly and Episode 1 has some of the best lo-fi music out of all the video games out there? Source: https://www.digitallydownloaded.net/2023/04/review-coffee-talk-episode-2-hibiscus-butterfly-pc.html- Reviewed:
- Comment: I am leaning towards the first hook since that is the best. At least the second give me options
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Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.JuniperChill (talk) 17:13, 22 April 2024 (UTC).
- Not a review, and I review oldest first so would not get to this any time soon (but would not object to any other reviewer doing so in the interim); both hooks violate WP:NPOV and have been struck. I've also removed one sentence that also violated WP:NPOV, so this is now below 1500 characters.--Launchballer 20:17, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- Given that it is midnight for me (in the UK), I will expand this article and think of a compliant hook ~10 hours from now after my sleep. I may even have to think about a hook that doesn't have something to do with the lo-fi music. JuniperChill (talk) 22:59, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- Done the expansion to at least 1500 characters (can also be 1.5kb), now I am thinking of the following hooks.
- ALT2: that Mohammad Fahmi, the main creator of Coffee Talk died in March 2022, after the sequel was announced?
- ALT3: that Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly was released after Mohammad Fahmi, the main creator of Coffee Talk, died in March 2022?
For both, the sources came from https://www.eurogamer.net/coffee-talk-creator-fahmi-has-passed-away
- No, it can't "also be 1.5kb" - WP:DYKRULES specifies "1500 characters". ALT3 is the better hook, although I'd expect a more merciless prepbuilder to truncate it at "died". Full review needed.--Launchballer 10:45, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
Just long enough, well refed, everything else GTG. Strongly suggest cutting ALT3 for reading clarity:
- ALT3a: that Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly was released after its creator Mohammad Fahmi died in March 2022? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Maury Markowitz (talk • contribs) 15:47, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- While that is clearer, it makes it look like Fahmi created only Episode 2, so I am making a slight adjustment of ALT3a below, removing the names so that it is clear that it is talking about the main creator of Coffee Talk (video game) and not the second.
- ALT3b: that Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly was released after its main creator of Coffee Talk died in March 2022?
- I think removing the names will be clearer. JuniperChill (talk) 17:43, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- While that is clearer, it makes it look like Fahmi created only Episode 2, so I am making a slight adjustment of ALT3a below, removing the names so that it is clear that it is talking about the main creator of Coffee Talk (video game) and not the second.
- ALT3a: that Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly was released after its creator Mohammad Fahmi died in March 2022? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Maury Markowitz (talk • contribs) 15:47, 23 April 2024 (UTC)