Talk:Coldwater, Mississippi

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This article has a lot of potential! However, there are definitely a lot of changes that can improve it. For starters, the beginning of this article page is riddled with code. It is impossible to read the content on there - perhaps due to a formatting error in your sandbox. In the "History" section of the article, I feel like the grammar is a little weak. There are some sentences that are extremely short, so I would recommend expanding on these - especially if you are going to use commas. There are some sentences that are fragments or run-ons. In the "Geography" section of the article, there is only one sentence listing to coordinates of Coldwater, Mississippi. I would recommend expanding this thought by doing more research on the terrain and surrounding areas, possibly naming nearby landmarks.

Moreover, it is possible to add more sections throughout the draft because it only gives us a small picture of Coldwater, Mississipi. Were there any interesting events that occurred there in the past? Perhaps the city is known for something special? I would look into this through both online and offline sources. Also, I noticed that the footnotes need a lot of work too. There are some footnotes that are letters instead of numbers near the bottom of the article. The paragraph formatting is a little off too, as some paragraphs are one sentence while others are multiple sentences. I believe adding a picture would be beneficial for the article as well, so readers can better picture how Coldwater, Mississippi looks like in real life. Lastly, you use a lot of statistics and numbers. However, it is very difficult to understand those metrics without clear labels. I would look through the article again and clarify these statistics.

@Melinda.an: Did you post the comment above on this talk page in error? It doesn't seem to make sense. Thanks. Magnolia677 (talk) 23:38, 20 October 2017 (UTC)