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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Rosiestep (talk · contribs) 04:45, 1 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this one within the next couple of days. --Rosiestep (talk) 04:45, 1 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

General comments
  • Some of this review includes suggested improvements, not required under WP:WIAGA.
Lead
Establishment and dissolution
  • wl: fourpence
  • introductory element lacking a subsequent comma - "For most of its existence the college had an establishment of a master and six chaplains"
  • Master's list - there's quite a bit of white space. Consider columns or moving the list into its own section at the end of the article.
    • Done. I have put this into two columns of six items in the original place as I think it works best here.
  • Half this section is about the College's history after the dissolution. Either split up the section or rename the header.--DavidCane (talk) 22:28, 2 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "...and the college and its lands were sold" - College has been capitalized elsewhere.
  • "Plate and other valuables..." - which plate?
    • Plate in this context means the collection of silverware belonging to the college rather than a single item. I have linked it.--DavidCane (talk) 22:28, 2 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Buildings
  • "a single-storey structure is attached to the south side." - capitalize the 'a'
Notes and reference
  • Perhaps rename the header Notes and references
    • Done. Added the missing terminal letter--DavidCane (talk) 22:28, 2 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Bibliography
  • I'd add Hasted
    • Done. I have also added Page to be consistent.--DavidCane (talk) 22:28, 2 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]


Some of the best prose I've read in awhile. I'll put this on hold for the usual 7 days. I've watchlisted it, but do ping me when you're ready for me to re-read the article as I'm working on several things at the moment. --Rosiestep (talk) 17:17, 2 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Thanks. I think, I have dealt with these all.--DavidCane (talk) 22:28, 2 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Good job; looks adequate for GA. --Rosiestep (talk) 22:43, 2 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]