Talk:Come On Over/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: TenPoundHammer (talk · contribs) 16:55, 3 June 2023 (UTC)
Very good work. So far there are only a couple things I think need to be addressed before the article is passed.
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- I made a couple minor tweaks to make things sound a bit more formal and flowing. Per the subject's nationality, MOS:ENGVAR for Canadian English seems to be properly upheld here. I also unlinked common instruments and corrected some typos.
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- Random checks of sources showed them to all be valid and free of WP:OR. Good breadth of sources including Billboard, The Tennessean, and contemporary sources.
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- Two things I thought of. Since Twain is Canadian, maybe emphasize the Canadian charts first, particularly the RPM Country Tracks. Most of these should be available at worldradiohistory.com. In particular, I believe the title track actually debuted at number one on the RPM Country Tracks charts, which seems like a noteworthy fact. I would also recommend adding a source to clarify that the pop version of "From This Moment On" was re-recorded without Bryan White.
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- y
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Hey, I took that picture of Bryan White!
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- @TabooMatters94: I see you have addressed my only concerns, so this is now getting passed. Good work! Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 21:15, 3 June 2023 (UTC)
- @TenPoundHammer: Thanks a lot for your suggestions, input, and for the quick review! I see that you tried to do something with the lead section, but didn't quite finished, "Similar to its predecessor The Woman in Me (1995), For Come On Over, Twain entirely collaborated with producer and then-husband Robert John "Mutt" Lange." Could you finish your idea? – TabooMatters94 (talk) 21:28, 3 June 2023 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.