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GA Review

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Comments:

  1. Remove the picture from the infobox and place in the route description (I would suggest doing the same for any of your other Good Article Nominees that have pictures in the infobox)
  2. Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
  3. Change "terminating" to "and terminates"
  4. Second wikilink to NY 9N not needed
  5. Change "into the heart of" to "within"
  6. Add some historical information to the lead
  7. "rounding around a mountain"? sounds awkward
  8. Remove "up" after "climbing"
  9. Remove commas after "hills" and "430m"
  10. In last sentence of route description, change "The" to "This"
  11. First sentence of history: begin with "The"
  12. "around the Lake George year annually": remove "the" and "year"
  13. Remove comma after "hand"
  14. In major intersections table for Valley Woods Road, add shield for CR 11

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 17:10, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Done except for #14, as I have to check into the Warren CR 11B possibility of it.Mitch32(Go Syracuse) 17:39, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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