Talk:County Route 166 (Sullivan County, New York)/GA1
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Comments:
- Place a request for a shield of the route
- Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
- Also request shields for other county routes CR 166 intersects
- Remove "Exit 112" from infobox
- Replace "in the county alone" with "within the county"
- Place last sentence in lead in preceding paragraph
- The second sentence in the route description sounds unclear and awkward: try clarifing and rephrasing
- In fourth sentence of route description, remove "homes"
- "a dead-end highway that intersects near the eastern terminus" sounds awkward, try rephrasing
- Replace "the homes re-emerge" with "the route heads through residential areas again"
- Why is a picture of Exit 98 of the Quickway included in the article? It does not relate to CR 166. I would suggest getting a picture of the actual route, if possible
- "in the by"? Awkward, needs to be fixed
- In first sentence of history, replace "of the" with "for"
- In last sentence of history, indicate CR 166 applies to this former portion of NY 17
- Is the mileage known for the junctions along CR 166?
I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 01:53, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
- All done.Mitch32(Go Syracuse) 20:20, 4 February 2009 (UTC)