Talk:County Route 174 (Sullivan County, New York)/GA1
GA Review
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Comments:
- Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
- Change "contains a" to "consists of"
- In second sentence of lead, flip the way termini are presented as it should be described west to east
- Was CR 174 assigned by 1994 or by 1995? You mention both years in the lead
- "rejoins its former direction"? sounds awkward
- "other direction on-ramp" sounds awkward
- In the route description, you seem to refer to clearings too much. Is there any variety in words that can be used here?
- In last sentence, you seem to indicate the eastern terminus of CR 174 to be the town line but indicate it to be directly at CR 175 elsewhere in the article. Where is the actual eastern terminus?
- "had begun and finished" sounds awkward
- "control was given to Delaware, Sullivan and Orange Counties of the former local road alignments." needs to be reworded
- Is the mileage for the NY 17 intersection known?
- If possible, get a picture of the route for the article
I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 14:44, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
- Done.Mitch32(Go Syracuse) 14:49, 8 March 2009 (UTC)