Talk:County Route S18 (California)/GA1

GA Review

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   This article's prose quality is beautiful, especially for a county route

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   There is no history pre-2008 in the article - it says 1970 in the infobox, but there has got to be more history pre-2008. There is now some pre-2008 history.

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

   Not as far as I can see

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

   This article has been stable, as well as quiet.

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   Not applicable per below.

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

   No pictures, not even a map of the highway

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

This article meets almost all of the criteria. There are no pictures, but I won't fail or On-hold the article for it. I do wish to see a map request in the next few days however. Anyway, fix the comments listed above and I will pass this article. Thanks. ^Mitch32^contribs 12:30, 27 May 2008 (UTC)

One comment. In the sentence, The route follows in a convoluted pattern from State Route 133 in Laguna Beach to State Route 55 near Orange, "convoluted" is very POVish, and not suitable for an encyclopedia. Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 12:43, 27 May 2008 (UTC)

Sorry about the pictures; I'm not a photographer. However, I'll see what I can do about the pre-2008 history. Can you please hold this GA Review until next Monday? I'm kind of busy this week in school, doing homework, and studying for tests. And I really don't have time to address the problem right now. And yes, my username used to be formerly Dabbydabby. Dabby (talk) 01:54, 28 May 2008 (UTC)

"Convoluted" - POV removed and sentence reworded. Dabby (talk) 02:01, 28 May 2008 (UTC)