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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 06:19, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

UTC time this will be first GA review of 2014. YE time this will be final GA review of 2013. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:19, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

 Done – The phrase suggested was axed. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 15:49, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
 Done – 'Moderate tropical storm status' was linked to the suggested page. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 15:49, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
 Done – The suggested text was removed.
 Not done – It wouldn't make any sense to link to Mauritius or World Meteorological Organization. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 15:49, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
 Done – Thanks. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 15:49, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
 Done – Changed piped link. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 15:49, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Mauritius Meteorological Services" why no link and IIRC it is one s?
 Not done – 'Services' is officially plural, e.g. their website. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 15:49, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
 Not done – It was done as a stylistic decision. Unlike Japan Meteorological Agency, or Joint Typhoon Warning Center, Météo-France is a rather short term hooked together by a hyphen. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 15:49, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
 Done – I'll assume you wanted me to link that, and as such, I did. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 15:49, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
 Done – Sounds good. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 15:49, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Due to Amara's projected path near Rodrigues, the Mauritius Meteorological Services issued a Class 1 warning" what's that? Any place you could link it? If no, put it in quotes. Deal or no deal? Ditto with the rest of the Wikipedia page. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:19, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
 Done – Not really a place I can link it, since Tropical cyclone warnings and watches ignores the SWIO. Not entirely sure if WP:MOS allows for quoting of terms like that, but I quoted it nonetheless.
  • "Other strong wind gust observations included a gust of 135 km/h (84 mph) at Sir Gaëtan Duval Airport and 133 km/h (83 mph) in Citronnelle.[39] " importance? I'd mention one of the two, but it's your call :P YE Pacific Hurricane 06:19, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
 Done – Axed the report from Citronnelle but kept the airport's report. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 15:49, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
 Done – None that I was able to find. TheAustinMan(Talk·Works) 15:49, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]