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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 22:53, 17 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:53, 17 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Sturmvogel 66: - any chance we can get this done before the end of the month? Parsecboy (talk) 12:02, 26 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
There is!
  • No DABs.
  • Photos properly licensed, although it might be useful to tell readers the source of the diagram
    • Good idea
  • Link mast
    • Done
  • 138 mm (5.4 in) Modèle 1893 45-caliber guns suggest moving 45-caliber to the beginning so the numbers don't blend together.
    • I don't like doing that because it's not how guns are typically described, and there's the possibility of confusion for readers familiar with small arms (and who might miss that there's not a leading decimal)
  • distributed atop and in the upper deck and, the latter firing through gun ports. Awkward.
    • See how I reworded it
  • in the central power of the ships Amidships?
  • Link headers in the table--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:45, 28 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]