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GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 15:31, 10 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

General

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 Done Fixed dead link

Info box

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  • You don't need to link Max Martin and Shellback twice. I'd unlink them as publishers.
 Done Unlinked

Lead

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  • No issues.

Background and composition

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  • was first leaked → a song can only leak once, so saying first is irrelevant
 Done Removed first

Critical reception

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  • It's either mixed or positive. I'm inclined to say mixed, as you proceed this by talking about a criticism.
 Done Changed to mix
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  • three-and-a-half starts → I think you can work out the mistake!
 Done Woops, corrected to stars
  • whilst also → Apparently "whilst" is archaic or something now, so better to say "while"
 Done Ok, changed to while
  • Though he noted the lyrics as repetitive, but stated → Despite citing the lyrics as repetitive, he thought
 Done Changed to your suggestion

Chart performance

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  • 2×/4× → We just write two times/four times
 Done

Music video

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  • No issues.

Live performances

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  • No issues.

Track listing

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  • No issues.

Credits and personnel

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  • No issues.

Charts and certifications

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  • The US charts should be in order, so Hot 100, then A/C, then Adult Pop, the Hot Dance, then Hot R&B.
 Done
  • Can you make the two year end charts the same width length.
 Done

Release history

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  • No issues.

References

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  • Rap-Up is the work, Devin Lazerine is the publisher.
 Done
  • FN39/40: Remove That Grape Juice. Big no no. Hugely unreliable, bias and self published website who have no qualifications.
 Done Oh, did not know that. Removed and replaced with reliable sources.

Summary

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Oh hold. Aaron You Da One 11:07, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think everything is good now. Rayman95 (talk) 18:02, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Passing. Aaron You Da One 12:31, 20 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]