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Reviewer: TbhotchTalk C. 01:57, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
  • General
1 dab link
Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Infobox
File:FGDaBoom.png need to be reduced.
Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Not done. It should be at least 200px and at most 300px TbhotchTalk C. 23:44, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, this is the second time I've done that. For some reason I always forget to reduce the image size. Anyway, done now. Gage (talk) 23:47, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Image needs Alternative text caption, as well as a better caption as other Family Guy Good Articles
Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Plot
"of the world and mutating" ... "from mutations" -> overlinked
Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"As the family then grows hungry," -> maybe is me, but this sound awkward
Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"As the family walks away" -> family is not a plural word?
There's only one family. Why would it be plural? Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Production
second season of Family Guy and the first -> second season of Family Guy, and the first
Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
who had wrote episodes for the show in the first season including "Mind Over Murder". -> Source soes not state it
Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
In Ref 2, RealNetworks, Inc. publish Film.com
Done. Gage (talk) 23:32, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 3, 4, 5, 8 need publisher
Done. Gage (talk) 23:32, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
This has become a running gag, having reappeared in episodes such as "Blind Ambition", "No Chris Left Behind" and in "Meet the Quagmires".[7] He is voiced by regular show writer Danny Smith.[7] -> Source does not state them. TbhotchTalk C. 01:57, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Gage (talk) 23:37, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reception
Isn't there ratings about the episodie?
Every effort has been made to locate ratings for episodes prior to 2001. Unfortunately, there is no such information available, especally not from a reliable source. So, there are no ratings information available to my knowledge, as I have attempted to locate them for many epiodes for this season. Gage (talk) 23:32, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • External links
The "external wiki" fails WP:ELNO
Done. Gage (talk) 23:32, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

On hold one week (August 3, 2010 UTC). TbhotchTalk C. 01:59, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I reviewed again and I see nothing wrong so, congratulations the article pass its GAN. TbhotchTalk C. 00:00, 29 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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