Talk:Dan Vadis

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This article sounds like the author was a big fan of Vadis... Those who edit should probably make this sound more neutral.

Examples: "He was a brawny, handsome durable 6'4" man"..."He was probably one of the most memorable actors in the Roman epic movies"..."What made Vadis stand out from other athletes and bodybuilders in these films was the obvious speed, dexterity, agility and all around durability that he brought to his films, bringing much needed energy to what otherwise may have been average fight scenes"

IMO someone should take a stab (another odd phrase from the article lol) at editing this...