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In a hurry, so I'll point out obvious stuff - sorry :)
Please wikilink publishers like ESPN and BBC. Also italicise newspapers like The Boxing Times Done
"Daniel defended this championship on four occasions" - refer to him as "Santos" Done
"In 1994 Daniel represented Puerto Rico" Done
"Daniel Santos debuted as a professional" Done
"this marked Daniel's first defeat in the professional circuit." Done
"Daniel Santos fought Ahmed Kotiev" Done
"Daniel won the fight by knockout in the fourth round" Done
"Daniel Santos and him was supposed to happen eight years before" Done
"Daniel defended against Antonio Margarito" Done
"and Daniel retained the welterweight championship by default." Done
"Daniel won the fight when referee Joe Cortez intervened in the eleventh round" Done
"On 17 August 2002 Daniel defended this championship" Done
"that they had signed Daniel Santos" Done
"ended Daniel won the contest by unanimous" Done
"to promote Daniel's fights" Done
"03 December 2005." - remove the "0" I believe you fixed that one
"where boxing is a common profession," - change to "was" so as to keep past tense Done
"celebrated in Montreal, Canada.[3] Where he won the bronze medal" - don't think you want the full stop here... Done
"against Andre Hawthorne in Fort Worth, Texas.[7] In a fight where he won by technical knockout in the first round." - same again Done
"Santos compiled a record of twenty-one victories" - ref for this being a record - I don't think this is refering to a global record, but rather to his personal record
"winnig his first professional championship" - typo? Done
"and it was televised on Showtime Too." - should that be "Showtime Two"? Nope, can't blame me for Showtime's bizarre desicions ;)
"the fight Santos' estrategy consisted" - typo, strategy? Done
"On 28 June 2003 he defended against Fulgencio Zúñiga..." - source for this sentence Done - I swear that this reference has been on my "favorites" (linked to this article's construction, not really a "favorite") for a while, but it somehow went unnoticed.
"Santos was under contract with Warrior's Boxing Promotions for one year his contract ended when he abandoned the promotion." - might need a comma or something here to make it more clear Done
"At the moment of the announcemt Don King stated that: “Daniel is another proud Puerto Rican world champion and I’m excited to have him with me,” promoter Don King said." - you say "Don King" twice. Also the next sentence is a bit chopppy. DoneI did some tweaks here, the double Don King was there because it went unnoticed in the quote
"This event took place in a fight card presented in the Madison Square Garden, against José Antonio Rivera. The contest ended in the eight round when Rivera's corner surrendered by "throwing in the towell"." - wikilink Madison Square Garden and "throwing in the towel" (if there's an article for that) Done - There is no article for towel throwing, and believe me when I tell you that my curiosity led me to check this before