Talk:Daniel Sprong

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Review: August 29, 2016. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:06, 12 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 08:06, 12 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

no dab links

Lead[edit]

"and made the Penguins immediately after being drafted." - I think you mean he made the Penguins squad

Junior[edit]

"at ages four and five Sprong played on teams with players as old as twelve or thirteen." - a comma is missing inbetween the words five and

Sprong

"The following season Sprong" - ditto
"He was ultimately selected in the second round, 46th overall, by the Pittsburgh Penguins." - This statement needs a reference

Professional[edit]

"against Ottawa Senators goalie Craig Anderson." - goaltender

Personal life[edit]

"Sprong remains a Dutch citizen but has applied for Canadian citizenship; as of 2015 he had still not received it." - is this still the case as of 2016?

References[edit]

no dead links
The Guardian link should be to The Guardian (Charlottetown) and not to the national UK newspaper
Remove link for The Guardian in reference 17

Good work so far! On hold until the points are rectified. MWright96 (talk) 09:03, 12 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Nominator appears to be inactive. So I have gone ahead and made the necessary changes with these two edits 1 and 2. Article is now GA. MWright96 (talk) 07:21, 29 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]