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This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the Career section, "He went on to feature as a first half substitute in a 3–3 draw with Bradford City on 2 January 2006" and "He featured for Brentford on five further occasions", I think I know what you mean with "featured", but maybe a re-write might suffice.
In the lead, it would be best to link "Ebbsfleet United" once. In the Career section, you might want to link "striker", I mean, I know what it means, but how 'bout your reader.
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Their homepage gives the impression it is run by a single administrator. Does this have any bearing on its reliability? Mattythewhite (talk) 16:09, 27 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Well, it seems that its there for facts, sourceful facts. I wouldn't hold it against you. But, if taken to FAC, I think the source might come up.
Not that I've seen. I've searched on Flickr and there weren't any decent ones available. If he'd have signed for York I'd have been able to take a photo myself. Mattythewhite (talk) 16:09, 27 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Its fine, I was just wondering.
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Not that much to do. If the statements above can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article!
Thank you to Mattythewhite who got the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) -- ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 19:12, 27 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
