Talk:David Benaron

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Comment: Trim out the known_for section in infobox. The infobox isn't meant to be a mini-resume AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 20:12, 18 October 2018 (UTC) Comment: Definitely notable, but I would remove/tweak some of the fluff in the article (see the Entrepreneur and Personal life sections) Bkissin (talk) 18:27, 18 October 2018 (UTC)

New edit suggestions[edit]

I've just joined Wikipedia as a contributor and am keen to get started on some edits - my interest area is medical pioneers and entrepreneurs. There's a header on this article identifying "multiple issues", so I've had a look and have some suggested edits that are (briefly) as follows:

- More general detail, including addition of wiki links throughout

- Completing the "Career" section - to incorporate academic and entrepreneurial career, including new content on academic work, plus a "Digital health" subheading on his more recent work in mobile health tech and wearables

- Updated references list (including correction of link with 404 error)

- New "External links" section

As a newbie, I'd be grateful of any initial thoughts before I go to edit the page.

Thanks!

Seagull019 (talk) 11:39, 29 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]