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David Molk GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman 16:39, 30 November 2009 (UTC) Overall this is a good article, though I found a couple issues:[reply]

  • He seems to at least have been looked at by many other colleges, passing glance or otherwise. Any notable looks should be mentioned. (ten total, not all necessarily need mention as he didn't seem to have interest in the other schools)
  • The college section feels almost apologist, as it's focusing more on the injuries to Michigan rather than Molk's performance his freshmen year. Could it be modified to tweak the focus?

I'll put it on hold and pass upon fixing, since there's not too much to fix. Wizardman 16:39, 30 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]