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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 19:00, 28 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I am reviewing this article and in general it seems fine. I made a few copy edits, for example de Lackner is De Lackner when it begins a sentence. There are only a few comments:

Design
  • "De Lackner's proposed concept" - as the lead is supposed to be a summary of the article, who or what De Lackner is should be explained here.
    • Done.

Xtzou (Talk) 19:00, 28 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality: Clearly and concisely written
    B. MoS compliance: Complies with required elements of the MoS
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources: Reliable sources
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: Well referenced
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects: Sets the context
    B. Focused: Remains focused on the topic
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: Pass!

Congratulations! Xtzou (Talk) 12:38, 29 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Awesome. Thanks much! - The Bushranger Return fireFlank speed 13:26, 29 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]