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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 16:22, 31 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Shall review...

  • "UPN requested that the ending of the episode was changed, something that Billingsley didn't like", avoid contractions, spell the bit in bold (BIB) out in its full form.
  • "...it is seen as a controversial episode by fans. Although the episode received the same audience share as the previous episode", to deal with repetition, replace BIB with "Dear Doctor"
  • What does a 3.7/6% share mean?
  • "It was first released in the United States on DVD; having been released as part of...", replace semicolon with comma.
  • "Indeed, Phlox's argument is reminiscent of some Social Darwinist theories which suggest that modern medicine slows evolution by allowing the weak to survive", the source doesn't contrast Phlox's argument with Darwinist theories. Perhaps you can cite one that does, in addition to Murray's book.
  • Ref 7 is The Sydney Morning Herald

No dab or dead links. No issue with the licensing of the Billingsley image. Shall pass once comments have been addressed. On hold until then. Lemonade51 (talk) 16:22, 31 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review, let me know if there's anything else you'd like me to look at. Miyagawa (talk) 17:16, 31 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Given my comments have been addressed and after reading the article for a second time, I'll be happy to pass this now. Nice job. :) Lemonade51 (talk) 17:44, 31 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]