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GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:56, 31 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:56, 31 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I eagerly but patiently await your review and critique of the article. Regards, Pericles of AthensTalk 19:15, 2 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a checkY
    1.b checkY
  • 2
    2.a checkY
    2.b checkY
    2.c checkY
    2.d checkY (20% is highest, due to phrase similarities)
  • 3a
    3.a checkY
    3.b checkY
  • 4
    4.a checkY
  • 5
    5.a checkY
  • 6
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    6.b checkY
  • No DAB links checkY
  • No dead links checkY
  • No missing citations checkY

Prose Suggestions

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Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

  • occurred on either the 10 or 12 August 30 BC in I believe the the should be removed, as 10 or 12 August makes more sense unless it is changed to 10th or 12th.
  • while Aidan Dodson and Dyan Hitlon are more tepid by stating it was circa 12 August. suggest while Aidan Dodson and Dyan Hitlon state it was c. 12 August.
  • Charmion adjusting her diademed crown before she herself fell suggest Charmion adjusting Cleopatra's diademed crown before she herself fell
  • @PericlesofAthens: That is all my suggestions, passing now. I apologize for taking so long. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:21, 23 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Pericles' comments

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@Iazyges: has the review started? I can't tell. Is there something I should do right away? I guess it's good to know that there are no dead links or missing citations. Pericles of AthensTalk 13:50, 8 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]