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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 20:01, 24 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
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  5. It is stable.
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  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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Done now. If you disagree with anything, feel free to say. Some of these things may be open to interpretation. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 01:24, 25 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Other comments[edit]

  • Another user also just changed his current team to the Heat. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 21:56, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "By late December, Walton had used half of his allotment of NBA days while the Heat roster was enduring 6 concurrent injuries" The source says he has used 22 of 45 days, so that's not exactly half. Also, if he stays on the roster for a few more games, then this phrase is going to need to be updated to say "more than half" or something.
    • The source from the 19th says 22 of 45 possible days. He played in the game on the 20th so we know he was on the roster at least another day and I see no source claiming he has been sent back down yet, so it is a near certainty that he will be on the roster tomorrow the 22nd and 23rd. They are on a homestand of games 22nd, 23rd, 26th, and 29th. I would not be surprised if he soon exhausts his days given the Heat injury situation. That aside, the 20th takes us over half and he is likely to continue to be on the active roster for the Heat in the near future.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:26, 22 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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