Talk:Disappointed (Ivy song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 11:35, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• became available exclusively → sounds weird, try "was released exclusively" or some sort of thing

 Done

• link music critics

 Done

• music critics, who

 Done

Background

• Songwriting and production for Long Distance took several years for Ivy to finalize → Try "It took several years for... to finalize..."

 Done

• When was the album released that the songs were "several years old"?

 Done

Promotion

• "In promotion for" → bizarre

 Done

• The rest of the article is GA-worthy.
•  On hold for seven days. — Simon (talk) 09:21, 11 May 2016 (UTC)

• @HĐ: Once again, I changed the article accordingly. Thank you for the nice comments. Carbrera (talk) 03:29, 14 May 2016 (UTC)