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GA Review

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Reviewer: --CallMeNathanTalk2Me 01:15, 5 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

 Doin...

Lead

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  • the first Slayer album featuring -> their first
  • Several of the songs on the album were inspired by television -> what does this mean?
  • The production posed as a challenge to the record company, as its marketing situation drew arguments -> If your going to write that you need to tell us why. You just made a statement and cut us off
  • Vocalist -> vocalist
  • said that the production was paid more attention -> ?
  • The cover was painted and designed by Wes Benscoter, who was filmed while doing his work -> not well-written

Overall

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  • This article has allot of grammar issues and should be thoroughly re-written. Additionally, there is no chart even though it did enter the charts in some countries. The personnel section is not sourced. There is no "Chart performance section"
  • This article needs allot of work.--CallMeNathanTalk2Me 04:21, 24 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]