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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:57, 14 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing this as part of a GA sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 07:57, 14 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead[edit]

  • Mention Hassan in the lead
  • "He did poorly in his heat due to an ankle injury, and did not win a medal." - and despite not winning a medal, he was cheered on by the crowd as he ran alone on the track for two laps.

Background[edit]

  • "The event was from August 29 to September 9." - The event was held from August 29 to September 9.
  • "The country had one athlete compete, in the men's 1500m T46." - 1500 meters

Athletics[edit]

  • Is there any information that states how Hassan qualified for the Paralympics? Is so, that would be useful to have in the article.
    • I tried English and French Google, but neither returned anything. Do you have any good places to look? Kees08 (Talk)
  • "competed in the men's 1,500m T46" - same issue as in the background section
  • You should add the mention of the ankle injury Hassan sustained in this section as you have done in the lede
  • "Hassan finished with a time of 11:23.50, a season best." - try: Hassan finished the race with a season-best time of 11:23.50.

References[edit]

That is all the issues I discovered during my read-through. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 08:24, 14 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Fixed all the issues I could. Kees08 (Talk) 03:59, 19 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Kees08: Regarding the qualification aspect, I myself could not locate the exact reason despite my best efforts or the Paralympics website sources are not specific enough in this instance. Nevertheless, this article is now a GA. MWright96 (talk) 11:46, 19 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]