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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:15, 10 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 13:15, 10 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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  • Wikilink Cat Music in the lead and the infobox

Background and release

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  • "Prior to representing her country at Eurovision, Nicola has taken part in the national selection five times beginning with 1992." - Nicola had taken part in the national selection five times with her first appearance coming in 1992.
  • "and was later included on Nicola's greatest hits album Best of Nicola (2003) and fourth studio album De mă vei chema (2004)" - and her fourth studio album (2004)
  • Wikilink Cat Music

At Eurovision

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  • Include the date when the Selecția Națională was held
  • "Romania automatically qualified to the final due to the top 19 result last year" - the previous year
  • "where Nicola performed in 24th place, " - the wording before this piece of text makes it sound like that Nicola performed in 24th place in the Eurovision Song Contest 2002
  • "the singer wore a red jacket along with red pants," - trousers as Eurovision related issues are written in BrEng
  • "Gehring from Prinz.de criticized" - criticised for the same reason as above

Release history

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  • Add scope="col" to the columns per MOS:DTT

Overall a nice little piece of work you've done. Placing it on hold for the time being to allow you to respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 18:43, 10 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Hi! Thank you very much for your review; I've implemented your queries above. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:07, 10 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Cartoon network freak: Nice timely response :) Can now promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:18, 10 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]