Talk:Dracunculiasis/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Comments[edit]

  • The first subsection should be broken into two IMO.
  • The see also section should be deleted with its content combined into the text of the article.
  • There are a lot of capitals in the first sentence. Should Medina Worm be capitalized?
  • "best documented" should be clarified to "most historically documented" as that seems to be what the ref is referring too
  • The lead needs to be expanded. It currently does not speak about treatment options
  • The "method" being used in the lead image should be described. And is it effective? Do we have a ref for this?

Reviewer: Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 17:43, 2 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

As I have become involved in editing the content of this article and the original nominated has moved on I will fail it, work further and renominate it in a bit.Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 03:57, 10 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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