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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:DuWayne Deitz/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 00:42, 20 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]


  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Notes

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  • Added American, college, high school track coaches, track athlete, shot putters and marines cats
  • Where'd you get his birthday?
  • I guess you couldn't find his birthplace?
  • No death place?
    • Couldn't find birth / death place.
  • ref 2 is dead and its cited 14 times
  • Is Korean conflict specifically different than Korean War. I cant check ref 2 since its dead. I was trying to add Category:United States Marine Corps personnel of the Korean War
  • "In the subsequent years St. Thomas compiled records" comma after years
    • Added.
  • Should we add 1973 and 1979 Minnesota Intercollegiate Athletic Conference (MIAC) Coach of the Year to the infobox? Also the 2 conference titles.
    • Added.
  • "Deitz died on August 22, 2018" I dont see that in the ref?
  • Wheres his birthday from?

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 01:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:19, 30 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]