Talk:Edward Opoku/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
Shall review this article. MWright96 (talk) 10:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Early life[edit]
- wikilink scholarship to Athletic scholarship
Done
- "was a Western New England Prep School All-Select honoree all four years in high school" - in all
Done, changed to "was a Western New England Prep School All-Select honoree in all four years of high school".
- "and was named as the co-MVP" - co-Most valuable player
Done
- Wikilink recruiting class to College recruiting
Done
College and amateur[edit]
- "As a sophomore, Opoku found his stride," - avoid idioms per MOS:IDIOM
Done, changed to "As a sophomore, Opoku netted six goals in 18 appearances for the Cavaliers."
- Wikilink the first mention of assist to Assist (football) for non-soccer readers
Done, linked in "after finishing the season with two goals and three assists."
- "Opoku was named to the All-ACC Second Team at the end of the season." - season's end
Done
- "He capped the season with his third consecutive all-conference nod," - acknowledgement
Done, changed to "He capped the season with his third consecutive all-conference honour".
- "Opoku departed Virginia following the year, ending his collegiate career with 16 goals in 56 appearances for the Cavaliers." - this sentence requires a citation to a reliable source
Done, linked to his Virginia profile.
AC Connecticut[edit]
- Wikilink yellow card to Fouls and misconduct (association football)#Yellow card (caution)
Done
- "joining up with the club for the 2017 PDL season." - joining the club is sufficient
Done
- "Opoku went on to appear four times on the year," - during
Done
- "Opoku scored once in four total appearances on the year, and concluded his two seasons with the club having played eight times and scored once." - need to be cited to a reliable source
Done, linked to his PDL profile
Columbus Crew AC[edit]
- "the first Generation Adidas player drafted by Columbus since Dilly Duka in 2010." - that statement needs to be supported by a reliable source
Done, moved the Massive Report reference to the end of the sentence since the ref covers that statement.
- "beginning a stretch in which he appeared in four consecutive matches, and concluded the season with six appearances in all competitions." - another reliable source is needed here
Done, linked to his Columbus profile.
That's all from my perspective. On hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 13:02, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
- @MWright96: I believe I've just about covered everything you've brought up, let me know if any of my changes still ned a bit of adjustment. Otherwise, thanks for the review (the second you've done for one of my nominations, I believe!) 21.colinthompson (talk) 23:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
- @21.colinthompson: Nothing else I could find so am now able to promote this article to GA status. MWright96 (talk) 11:55, 23 February 2019 (UTC)