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Good articleEl Costo de la Vida has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
February 10, 2023Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:El Costo de la Vida/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:06, 3 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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I can get this done in one day! --K. Peake 08:06, 3 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Shouldn't "Burbujas de Amor" be listed as another B-side in the infobox per the track listing?
  • Areíto Studios → 4:40 since that is the correct name and you don't use the term studios in infobox
  • "his sixth studio album" → "his sixth studio album,"
  • "The track is a" → "It is a"
  • Remove the introduction to Loketo since this is only needed in the body
  • Wikilink soukous to itself
  • "and Guerra performs it as" → "and is performed by Guerra as"
  • "It was released as" → "The song was released as" and make this the second sentence of this paragraph instead
  • In the second para, move the music video info to being after critical and commercial reception
  • "The accompanying music video for the song" → "The music video for the song"
  • "but it still received" → "despite still receiving"
  • Reword the award sentence to mentioning that it won the Tropical Song of the Year award at the 1993 Lo Nuestro Awards with the pipe
  • "in the US." → "in the United States." per MOS:US on the first being the first mention in the new order, also add that it was his first chart topper

Background and composition

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  • Pipe merengue to Merengue music on the audio sample text
  • Wikilink Juan Luis Guerra
  • Remove commas around Bachata Rosa
  • "as for music for" → "as music for" to avoid duplicate usage of for
  • "than the last one"." → "than the last one."" per MOS:QUOTE
  • Remove the comma after cha-cha-cha
  • "and song's composer" → "and song composer"
  • "in Guerra sings about" → "in which Guerra sings about"
  • "not Mitsubishi, not Chevrolet"." → "not Mitsubishi, not Chevrolet."" with the pipe
  • "a measure of coffee"" → "a measure of coffee"."
  • "He also makes references" → "Guerra also makes references"

Music video

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  • "The news monitors behind the singer depicts" either change to the news monitor if it is only one or to depict if you mean multiple monitors
  • Remove the comma after Chilean military dictatorship
  • "The video also intersperses with scenes" → "This content is interspersed with scenes"
  • "in the category" → "in the category of"
  • Pipe 5th Annual Lo Nuestro Awards to Premio Lo Nuestro 1993
  • "It was nominated" → "It was nominated for"
  • Fix the misspelling of international on the award's name

Promotion and reception

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  • "was released as album's" → "was released as the album's"
  • Wikilink greatest hits album
  • Allmusic → AllMusic with the wikilink
  • "boundaries of salsa" citing" → "boundaries of salsa", citing"
  • "The Boston Globe reviewer Fernando Gonzalez" → "The Boston Globe reviewer Fernando Gonzalez" with the wikilink
  • "Despite the latter's concern," → "Despite the editor's concern,"
  • Add a full-stop after Tropical Song of the Year
  • "It was recognized as" → "The track was recognized as"

Track listing

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  • Shouldn't the titles be surrounded by speech marks?

Charts

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Weekly charts

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Year-end charts

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  • Good

See also

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  • Good

References

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Final comments and verdict

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