Talk:Elisabeth Sladen/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 13:35, 5 February 2012 (UTC)

Unfortunately I am going to have to fail this article as it evidently does not meet WP:GAC. For starters the lead does not provide a summary of the subject and should be much longer. There are a couple of dead links and a dablink. References are not formated correctly; what makes IMDB a reliable source? Content in addition can be expanded, by skim reading through I notice a lot of short, one line sentences. Prose furthermore is jumpy.

I suggest you take this to WP:PR for more detailed feedback before you renominate.