Talk:Elle Leonard/GA2
GA2 Review[edit]
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Reviewer: The Blue Rider (talk · contribs) 23:39, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
General comments[edit]
- The Blue Rider It looks like you signed up to review this a couple of weeks ago, then never started the review. Are you going to be able to do the review? RoySmith (talk) 00:34, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
- I forgot about it, I will do the review. The Blue Rider
09:55, 17 December 2023 (UTC) - Just noticed that there are concerns about the notability of this subject and I must agree. I will abstain from reviewing until it's certain that the article won't get deleted. The Blue Rider 09:59, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
- @The Blue Rider I think that's unwise. There was one comment on the talk page about notability. If this was at WP:AfD, it would make sense to hold up the review, but it's not and it's already been dragging out since August. If you think WP:QF applies, you should quick-fail the review. Otherwise, it needs to be completed. RoySmith (talk) 15:16, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
- @The Blue Rider This hasn't progressed any in the past couple of weeks. If you intend to finish the review, please do so quickly. If not, then please indicate that you are unable to continue so somebody else can take it over. RoySmith (talk) 16:10, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
- @The Blue Rider despite actively editing and being asked for a status update, you have not done anything with this review. I'm declaring it abandoned. It saddens me to do that because this has been in the review queue for 272 days and this will be the second abandoned review in a row. I'll be blunt; you have done the nominator and the GA community a disservice here. RoySmith (talk) 17:48, 6 January 2024 (UTC)
- @The Blue Rider This hasn't progressed any in the past couple of weeks. If you intend to finish the review, please do so quickly. If not, then please indicate that you are unable to continue so somebody else can take it over. RoySmith (talk) 16:10, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
- @The Blue Rider I think that's unwise. There was one comment on the talk page about notability. If this was at WP:AfD, it would make sense to hold up the review, but it's not and it's already been dragging out since August. If you think WP:QF applies, you should quick-fail the review. Otherwise, it needs to be completed. RoySmith (talk) 15:16, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
- I forgot about it, I will do the review. The Blue Rider
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Background and early life[edit]
- Grandfather Gary Bielfeldt played football for Illinois Fighting Illini football. Remove one of the footballs.
- -TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 17:53, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
- What's the relevance of the professions and names of the grandparents?
- Admittedly, in most cases you present the names and professions of parents, but in this case if uberwealth, the source of that wealth is encyclopedic here. It is not uncommon for the superfamous/important grandparent to get more prominence (e.g., Mike Yastrzemski, A. J. Foyt IV, Benjamin Harrison)-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 17:59, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
- Constructed between the October 21, 1994, groundbreaking and the October 4, 1996, dedication. I'm not quite getting this phrase.
- The Bielfeldt Athletic Administration Building was constructed between those dates.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 18:01, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
- Only the last paragraph really talks about her, is there more information about her early life?
- That is what I've got.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 18:04, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
- — Preceding unsigned comment added by The Blue Rider (talk • contribs) 09:55, December 17, 2023 (UTC)-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 17:49, 20 December 2023 (UTC)