Talk:Emergency ascent

Merger proposal

Controlled emergency swimming ascent is a subtopic of this article, and the current independent article is a small stub, unlikely to expand much. The content is already mostly in this article, which provides the context. I recommend a merge and redirect. • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 10:22, 18 September 2016 (UTC)

Controlled buoyant lift is a small stub, and the topic is a legitimate subtopic of this article as it is also a form of emergency ascent. This article is not too big to include the two proposed for merge - they will improve the coverage of the topic. I recommend a merge and redirect. • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 18:52, 19 September 2016 (UTC)

No response. I will assume no objection and do the merges.• • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 15:55, 6 October 2016 (UTC)

Merges done. • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 16:52, 6 October 2016 (UTC)

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