Talk:Endress+Hauser Optical Analysis
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History section is lacking
[edit]I will be adding some history of the company shortly, I hope that other editors will help to make sure that it does not sound like promotion, that is a fairly common problem with covering the histories of companies. SoftwareThing (talk) 17:45, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
- I added some text, slight redundancy over what was there but added some details, hopefully neutral enough that it avoid a tone of promotion. SoftwareThing (talk) 23:59, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
Offices Section
[edit]It might be useful to provide a list of offices around the world. That seems like more work than I'm willing to do, though. SoftwareThing (talk) 23:58, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
Still pretty slim on references and citations
[edit]There are still "citation needed" here and there, and some of the obsolete things needed to be removed without replacing them with suitable links. Finding time and motivation to update the page is lacking. :) SoftwareThing (talk) 17:06, 26 June 2023 (UTC)