Talk:Eoperipatus totoro
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[edit]I don't want to interfere before it become necessary, but this article needs certain corrections and some assistance to correct lack of clarity and possible errors.
For example: "Unlike other velvet worms, Eoperipatus totoro has uniquely shaped hairs on its body surface."
What does that mean? Should it read something more like:
"Among the Onychophora Eoperipatus is unique in that its skin is sparsely covered with short, stiff hairs."
If not, then what?
Also:
"They eject a net of glue from two appendages on their back."
They DO???? I don't THINK so!!! I don't know what the intended sense was, but that sounds like nonsense to me.
I don't mind helping, so don't hesitate to call me, but one way or another, some work needs to be done fairly smartly. JonRichfield (talk) 08:33, 10 January 2015 (UTC)