Talk:Episode 1 (Twin Peaks)/GA1
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 15:32, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
Go Twin Peaks. This review is mine. :) TBrandley 15:32, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
- Infobox
- Where is the running time referenced? Try iTunes Store, Amazon.com, TV Guide, something like that
- Where is the production code referenced? Try epguides
- Add "Twin Peaks (season 1)" to episode lists
- Lede
- The lede seems a bit short per WP:LEDE, particularly the third and last paragraph. Where's a plot summary, what channel did it air on, what does the show center on, etc. like "Episode 2"
- Add year for Wild at Heart film
- Plot
- Some paragraphs seem short. Perhaps merge some.
- Fix citation needed tags, for direct quotes
- "$" US dollar? Canadian dollar, etc?
- Production
- "The episode features the first appearance of Frank Silva as Killer BOB, though the character is not yet identified at this point. Silva was the art director for the series, and had accidentally been caught on camera during a shot. Lynch was pleased with the result and decided to include Silva in the cast from then on" short paragraph, perhaps merge
- Broadcast and reception
- ABC → the American Broadcasting Company (ABC), as per MOS:ACRO
- A− → "A−"
- References
- Nothing
- External links
- Nothing
Well, that's it. On hold; good work. TBrandley 22:24, 4 September 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. Kinda sucks that you got into hearing about this through the episode with the big reveal; it's a really fantastic show and you should definitely check it out. If you're in the US though, don't buy the seasons separately as the US season one set skips "Pilot" for some ass-backwards reason. GRAPPLE X 23:08, 4 September 2012 (UTC)
- Your welcome! I'm in Canada (should be the same though, both in Region 1), I'll watch it (find it online somewhere, obviously, or get the DVD for extra features, stuff like that) Cheers, TBrandley 23:18, 4 September 2012 (UTC)