Talk:Episode 5 (Twin Peaks)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:23, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

• Infobox: Production code?

  Didn't add one; to be honest I'm seeing less use for them as I go on. If you think it's important I could dig it up. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: You need to mention the episode's broadcast and ratings per WP:LEDE

  Already there—"First airing on May 10, 1990, "Episode 5" was viewed by approximately 18 percent of the available audience during its broadcast; it has received positive reviews from critics." GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: Federal Bureau of Investigation should be simply "FBI"

  Sure? Done. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)

• Plot: Merge shorter paragraphs where possible

  Done. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)

• Production: Unlink Twin Peaks there per WP:REPEATLINK

  Not done, that's the only instance of the link in the article body. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)

• Reception: "ABC Network" write out fully then have (ABC) upon first mention

  Written as "American Broadcast Company" now. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)

• Reception: A− needs quotation marks around

  Got it. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)

• References: Why do some references have publishers, and some don't. Choose one method please.

  Added. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)

TBrandley 16:36, 30 September 2012 (UTC)

Think I've addressed everything now. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)

Passing. TBrandley 23:07, 4 October 2012 (UTC)