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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 20:26, 26 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Grabbing for a review. Had a quick skim already - looks really good. Miyagawa (talk) 20:26, 26 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

There are a couple of links to User:Aoba47 that need fixing. Mr Stephen (talk) 21:55, 26 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I thought it would be something like that. Mr Stephen (talk) 09:10, 27 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, let's get the review started.

  • Lead: Duplicate link to Biller in the first paragraph (also in the infobox)
  • Fixed.
  • "The episode received Nielsen ratings of 6.1/10 percent, and saw a decrease from the previous week" - you could switch the comma for a semicolon and remove "and saw"
  • Fixed.
  • Plot: "is deemed to ill to work" - "too" rather than "to"
  • Fixed.
  • Fixed.
  • "caught for communicating to Voyager" - I think "with" would be better than "to"
  • Fixed.
  • Writing: Would it be possible to mention when the Vidiians were first introduced? (in Phage (Star Trek: Voyager)) Third paragraph would be the most appropriate location.
  • Fixed.
  • Separation of B'Elanna Torres: "The cast and crew pent some time" - I presume "spent"
  • Fixed.
  • "while the Klingon did not have logic r control" - is that "logic or control"?
  • Fixed.
  • "actress Joy Kilpatrick was casted as Dawson's" - just cast; apparently casted fell out use in the middle ages (although I'm sure we have a Wiki for that version of English!)
  • Fixed.
  • Critical reception: Pipe a link at TrekToday through to TrekNation
  • Fixed.
@Aoba47: No other issues found. The free use image is a good choice and located in the optimum position. It's mostly use a bunch of typos. Will be happy to pass this when you've taken a look - a good job and interesting read. Miyagawa (talk) 12:41, 27 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.