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Is this article "written like an advertisement?"

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@Fram: Why is this article's content not acceptable? Jarble (talk) 17:36, 3 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

For example, the excessive use of glowing adjectives. Other example, grand but rather vapid sentences like "The settlement of the region has played a pivotal role in shaping the current biodiversity. Indigenous communities have coexisted with the diverse wildlife for centuries, contributing to a delicate balance that has evolved over time. ", which is a statement that can be made about virtually any inhabited region on Earth but is presented as some unique claim for Gujarat, in a section about dinosaurs no less... Fram (talk) 17:48, 3 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@DSP2092: These sections need to be rewritten, following Fram's suggestions here. Jarble (talk) 19:20, 3 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
ok. i will rewrite and add sources to it. DSP2092 (👤, 🗨️) 04:36, 4 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]