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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 06:27, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
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Almost there. 7-day hold to Krisgabwoosh. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:04, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
- Will pass. Pinging Krisgabwoosh again to see the numeral comment. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:32, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
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[edit]- Should "Minister of Mining and Metallurgy" be capitalized in the first sentence?
- I tend to follow the style of not capitalizing titles if it comes after a person’s name (i.e. Joe Biden served as vice president of the United States). Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:18, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
- Ah, OK. That makes sense.
- 2019 to 202 , and as director missing a digit; drop the comma (User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences)
- Don't italicize "Radio Fides Potosí" (radio station names don't get italics)
- The minister of mining must publicly apologize". Full sentence — period in quote. MOS:INOROUT
- ...remove the authority; one she complied with. "Remove the authority" sounds un-idiomatic; that should not be a semicolon; the trailing "with" is kind of meh here
- Changed to: "remove the minister. The president complied, and on 30 May, "
- Write "22" as a number
Done. Out of curiosity, what is Wikipedia's general style for when to and not to write out numbers vs. using numerals? Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:18, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
- Ah, turns out both are acceptable: MOS:NUMERAL.
Integers greater than nine expressible in one or two words may be expressed either in numerals or in words (16 or sixteen, 84 or eighty-four, 200 or two hundred).
- Ah, turns out both are acceptable: MOS:NUMERAL.
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[edit]- Sources check out, and all references are archived.
- Earwig turns up no issues.
- Images need alt text.
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