Talk:Final Fantasy VII G-Bike/GA1
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Reviewer: Abryn (talk · contribs) 16:36, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Development
- 'Titles' > 'Title's'
Reception
- Game critics is a bit redundant since every critic cited is a game critic.
- Kyle Hilliard's first comment is how fans would react to this, so "further" feels like it doesn't quite make sense.
- May be good to change the quotation of "uh, what?" to say instead that people reacted with confusion.
- Given that the other sources say "person of website" it may be worthwhile to say "AppGet staff" for consistency.
Sources
- Can you attach a source verifying that the game takes place in Midgar?
- Can you attach a source verifying Tifa's role?
Images
- Fair use rationales should have explanations for why it's not replaceable with free media or how it respects commercial opportunities.
- Not necessary for GA, but consider alt text to describe the images.
- Ok @Abryn:, I did the copy editing as requested, good fixes. I changed the “titles” I think you were referring to, and I placed the reference that describes how the game takes place in Midgar in the sentence next to it. This Japanese source https://game.watch.impress.co.jp/docs/news/667842.html discusses her appearance where she helps Cloud in the game, though she is not a playable character. I also improved the fair use rationale as you asked. So that should do it for GA status unless there is something else or I missed something! By the way, what is alt text? Judgesurreal777 (talk) 18:53, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
- Alt text is just, you add |alt= followed by text describing what the image shows. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 19:11, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
- Ok @Abryn:, I did the copy editing as requested, good fixes. I changed the “titles” I think you were referring to, and I placed the reference that describes how the game takes place in Midgar in the sentence next to it. This Japanese source https://game.watch.impress.co.jp/docs/news/667842.html discusses her appearance where she helps Cloud in the game, though she is not a playable character. I also improved the fair use rationale as you asked. So that should do it for GA status unless there is something else or I missed something! By the way, what is alt text? Judgesurreal777 (talk) 18:53, 5 June 2020 (UTC)