Talk:Final Five (gymnastics)/GA1
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Nominator: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 22:11, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 07:52, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk) 07:52, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
Prose and MoS[edit]
- Probably put a disambig on the top of the page, considering there are other types of Final Fives.
Done
Lead[edit]
- It was the United States', wikilink United States to United States at the Summer Olympics.
- Done
- second at an Olympics hosted outside the United States. , mention in body too + source or just omit. Suggesting to omit
- Done
- With nine medals total, the Final Five is the most decorated American Olympic gymnastics team., As of [YEAR],....
- Done
Team background[edit]
- dubbed the Fierce Five, at the 2012 London Olympics, add comma at the end.
- Done
- With 10 gold medals total, , spell out as ten. MOS:NUMERAL
- Done
- becoming the first American women, woman as it's referring to Biles.
- Done
- alongside Douglas and Raisman, 2016 U.S. Classic, add comma at the end.
- Done
- Then at the National Championships, Then, at the National Championships.
- Done
- fourth-straight, remove hyphen.
- Done
Olympic Trials[edit]
- for the Olympic team with, add comma after team.
- Done
Captain and nickname[edit]
- age 22, suggest saying it as 22 years old.
- Done
- The team members chose the name Final Five before the Olympic Games,, I'm guessing the italicization is for emphasis? Use the templates provided in Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Text formatting#Emphasis, rather than apostrophes.
- Done switched to quotation marks, although those can be removed if needed.
- made up of four athletes, add comma at the end.
- Done
2016 Summer Olympics[edit]
- Instances of on uneven bars and on the uneven bars and other apparatus, would suggest to stick with the latter to maintain consistency.
- Done All instances should be fixed now
- over points ahead of Raisman, list how many points.
- Done
- who won the silver medal, add comma at the end.
- Done
- bronze-medalist Aliya Mustafina, Mustafina of...[Nation]..
- Done
- World all-around champion , uncapitalize world.
- Done
- and Ecaterina Szabo (1984), add comma at the end.
- Done
- Overall, the Final Five won nine Olympic medals, making them the most decorated American gymnastics team in history, As of....
- Done
Post-Olympics[edit]
- Hernandez returned to completion in 2021, guessing it should be competition.
- Done
- postponed-2020 Olympic Games, remove hyphen.
- Done
- plus one of the three alternates, who?
- Locklear, information added. Done
- Locklear, information added.
Gallery[edit]
- I suggest removing, since they're featured in the first image shown. But per Wikipedia:Image use policy#Image galleries, a bit iffy. Though I heavily suggest removing it since they would be mentioned in the first image.
- Done
Images[edit]
- Images have proper licenses.
- List down members of the "Final Five" in the image caption seen in the lead. Clarify the members from left-to-right, per the tag.
- Done
- The Final Five celebrating after winning the Women's Team All-Around at the 2016 Summer Olympics, caption on second image. Uncapitalize Women's Team All-Around.
Refs[edit]
- Earwig pass.
- Manual pass.
Spotchecks[edit]
- Ref 36, seems good.
- Ref 49, seems good.
- Honestly, all of the sources seem pretty nice, standard sources someone would use in a sports article, pass. :)
Misc[edit]
- No ongoing edit war, pretty broad information on the topic, neutral.
Good Article review progress box
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