Talk:Force Majeure (Millennium)/GA1
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 04:46, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
- Plot: "…and takes the girls…" -> "…and they take the girls…"
- Plot: "Black does not know where the cult have escaped to" -> "Black does not know where the cult has escaped to"
- Reception: "…borrowed from The X-Files…" The X-Files should be italicized
On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 15:45, 29 May 2012 (UTC)