Talk:Foundation for God's Glory

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The tone is far too glowing. It reads like an advert. I removed the section on the founder as irrelevant and removed references to god as instrumental in the set up, but it still needs work to make it encyclopedic. Theresa Knott | The otter sank 15:28, 25 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I think the current article which has already been toned down and cleaned up is encyclopedic enough. Kylethea (talk) 16:03, 3 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]