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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:18, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]


I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:18, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

 Done
    • Move that to the lede.
 Done
  • partition Austria-Hungary of
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  • French prime minister Georges Clemenceau in particular awkward. Suggest "in particular, French prime..."
 Done
  • in favor of Kingdom of Romania, the Kingdom of Serbs, Croats and Slovenes, First Czechoslovak Republic "the Kingdom" "and the"
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  • You have a real problem in this article with forgetting to use articles like "the", "of", etc. Please do a thorough re-read and add all these sorts of missing words. Ping me when you're done and I'll continue the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:17, 30 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Sturmvogel 66: I am ashamed to admit that you are right. It should be a tad better now.--Catlemur (talk) 19:16, 30 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Hungarian society experienced a rise in the popularity of nationalism and revanchism Briefly explain why this happened in the lede
 Done
  • Link franc in the lede
 Done
  • Capitalize Admiral
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  • Post-war Hungary experienced diplomatic isolation and economic hardship reads awkwardly to me, perhaps: "... suffered economic hardship and was isolated diplomatically"?
 Done
  • convert 93,000km
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  • Hyphenate long established, French occupied, left over, oath swearing, brother in law,
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  • spell out dollars
 Done
 Done

@Sturmvogel 66: All done.--Catlemur (talk) 16:45, 1 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]